In Its Wake

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in its wake birds retreat of sea a mountain gut a forest~ nature weather change 2020 November 08 *4th Place* Any NEW Nature Inspired Haiku ~~Tania Kitchin

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Fj Thomas

Date: 12/18/2020 7:05:00 AM

So much power... so much loss. But then it also creates growth in other areas doesn't it. Very nice William :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/18/2020 10:05:00 AM

True, as we see the devastation and nature sense re-creation ... and moves on, thank you kindly, Aloha!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/19/2020 3:54:00 PM

- Congratulations on your wonderful haiku, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/19/2020 4:28:00 PM

Many thanks, sot Anne-Lise, Aloha!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/19/2020 2:45:00 PM

William, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku!

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/19/2020 2:54:00 PM

Thanks, Tania, for another of your wondrous opportunities, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/19/2020 1:05:00 PM

William, sending you congratulations and a high five on your win! This looks like Mt. St. Helens in Washington. You described the aftermath of an eruption perfectly my friend - birds fleeing and a forest gutted! So well done. Aloha!

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/19/2020 2:52:00 PM

Wow, thanks for your straightforward reactiveness, Sam, 'tis an ingenious review for you hold my endearing respect, Aloha!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/8/2020 11:20:00 PM

Lovely nature haiku. ~~

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/8/2020 11:25:00 PM

Welcoming words, Victor, Aloha!