In It, But Not of It

In the world, but not of it thus disengaged, do you rise above it

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/26/2023 2:40:00 PM

Few words with much said. Good Write. Have a great day...........................

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/26/2023 5:00:00 PM

Keep 'em brief, I say.

John Lawless

Date: 1/26/2023 6:06:00 AM

..."there's no one left but thee and me....and we're not too sure of thee" (a line from a song of long ago")

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/26/2023 4:59:00 PM

Reminds me of 'Arsenic and Old Lace.' One of those ladies said to the other: 'Everyone's pixilated except me and you. And I'm not too sure about you!' :) gw

Michael Tor

Date: 1/25/2023 8:50:00 PM

Great advice here my friend...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/25/2023 10:43:00 PM

Thank you so much, Michael. Hope all is well. ~ Gershon

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 1/25/2023 8:26:00 PM

It is sad, but sometimes this is the only way to stay sane; quickly said, not so easy to do. I liked this Monoku, Gershon. Take care, Shirley.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/25/2023 10:44:00 PM

Let us stay sane, Shirley. At least there will be two of us 'sane-stirs' on the planet. Keep smiling, gw