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In Her Reflection I Am Poetry

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Mind will always dream, eyes will endlessly gaze, lips will remain impatient. Although, I've not met her, the heart is a battleground of anguish and angst. Its cries, seeking the serenity of her secret sanctuary. Hope ascends to tranquil heavens. Twilight's baptism, blends merigold into fading blue horizons with sparkling amethysts hues. Oh my beautiful beloved, come to me with your comforting arms, like soothing stars, shepherding the nebulous night sky. Destiny can deceive, sometimes a friend, sometimes a foe, but, we search for the blessings, through each trial and tribulation. For, she is the silence, between heart beats - who's name rests upon tense tips of the tongue. In the discrepancy of distance, love's appetite lingers in lament - yearning for our lips to merge. Yet the night is an unfinished symphony. Idyllic lyrics craving to pour, upon an incomplete song sheet. Without her, Silent One's muse is mute. I am not a poet, But in her reflection - I am poetry. Simple Musing Silent One 1 August 2020

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Real Heman

Date: 12/8/2022 10:01:00 AM

This piece just massaged my soul and I'm no longer silent, for if you listen intently, I'm... Heman~poet friend, Kenya.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/19/2020 6:51:00 AM

Rereading this beauty..until you post something new and I can read your soul.

Silent One
Date: 10/19/2020 7:35:00 AM

Thank you...

Amor Otong

Date: 10/14/2020 8:24:00 AM

Love every lines of it..

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 8/30/2020 11:46:00 AM

Wow, wow, what an amazing write. This really is a lovely poem. You write so well. The smoothness of your pen, the Imagery that your words create and he thoughts they provoke bring smile on the readers' faces.

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 8/15/2020 11:04:00 PM

O Silent One, reading this, one can't remain silent for long, and here am I lost in its rich texture. Beautiful.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/6/2020 2:01:00 AM

Lovely heart warming poetry, love it...

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/5/2020 4:22:00 PM

So full of emotion in this wonderful write. Congrats to you. love phyl

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/5/2020 12:01:00 PM

Oh, Silent One. This is beautiful! I can tell this really came from within and flowed naturally. A Fav for me. I hope all is well :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/4/2020 10:22:00 AM

Wow! What an amazingly beautiful poem Silent One. I love every verse, especially the one Uma mentioned below and the last three lines. Sorry I wasn't online when this received POTD, but it goes to my faves now. Congratulations on your well-deserved honor! Hugs, Carolyn

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/4/2020 9:53:00 AM

Hello Silent One this poem is emotional and I know that you miss her. Congrads on your PODT. Enjoy your day my friend.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/4/2020 6:22:00 AM

Hi Silent, fgirstly, my hearty congratulations on your receiving Poem of the day honours with this excellent write. The words sing into the soul, painting such vividly beautiful visions. You take the free verse form into other realms with your poetic grace. You use it with such skill. A poetic gem indeed. Has to be a fav. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.

Silent One
Date: 8/4/2020 6:56:00 AM

Thank you my friend, hope you are well and in good health..

John Watt

Date: 8/3/2020 4:10:00 PM

I'm enamoured by this, SO. Your alliteration and assonance are brilliant, your theme is original, and there is so much soul. Love your ending. Congrats on POTD ~ John

Silent One
Date: 8/4/2020 6:57:00 AM

Thank you, my two most favourite poetry techniques.. It is our soul that falls in love first my friend..

V. Deepa

Date: 8/3/2020 11:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win S.O sir..!! Splendid write.I can feel the emotions in each of the lines sir.It shows how you miss her. I can also see your beloved reflecting and making you a wonderful poetry.:-)Keep writing and Keep inspiring.Take care.Warmest regards sent your way:-)~Deepa

V. Deepa
Date: 8/4/2020 8:37:00 AM

Oops so sorry.Okay here after I wouldn't call you "sir"..!!:-)

Silent One
Date: 8/4/2020 6:58:00 AM

Thank you, I appreciate your feedback. Please stop calling me sir though..

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/3/2020 10:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I love your lines, "I am not a poet, But in her reflection - I am poetry." If not a poet then your pen is working over time. Another wonderful write from your wonderful pen. Enjoy your win and day................

Silent One
Date: 8/4/2020 8:19:00 AM

Thank you Paula, glad you like the poem.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/3/2020 9:16:00 AM

Silent One my friend, I am not in the least surprised that this gem got POTD - Congratulations and blessings, as well as hugs and love. Jennifer.

Silent One
Date: 8/3/2020 9:40:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer...

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/3/2020 7:27:00 AM

If simple musing is thus profound, deep reflection will sure astound! ... Wonderful, enchanting musing, Silent!! Right into my FAVES, and congrats on POTD! Best wishes, Gershon

Silent One
Date: 8/3/2020 9:41:00 AM

I call them a simple musing when I write them quickly... One day I will take my time and write a poem properly.. lol.. Thanks for appreciating.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/3/2020 7:10:00 AM

There are so many wonderful lines...my favorite is "I am not a poet, but in her reflection, I am poetry" A truly wonderful write. Congrats on your POTD

Silent One
Date: 8/3/2020 9:41:00 AM

Thank you Jeanne... I must say, I was pleased with that ending.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 8/3/2020 1:33:00 AM

Wow SO this is exquisite, divine, taking me into another world. I feel enlightened and free after reading it and each time I read it it lifts me even higher ~ thank you for this gift ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Silent One
Date: 8/3/2020 9:55:00 AM

Thank you for appreciating, glad you liked it so much.

Maria Williams

Date: 8/2/2020 11:12:00 PM

Everything about your poem creatively captures the rapture of a love that continuously seeks completion. Beautiful alliteration, imagery is wonderful. Congratulations on your POTD, well chosen Si....Maria Hugs

Silent One
Date: 8/3/2020 9:55:00 AM

Thank you Maria.. nice to see you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/2/2020 8:42:00 PM

A beautiful depiction of the heart's longing for love, with enchanted imagery.

Silent One
Date: 8/3/2020 9:56:00 AM

Thank you..

John Hamilton

Date: 8/2/2020 8:16:00 PM

Love your imagery and alliteration eg seeking serenity of her secret sanctuary, love that line and all the others of course, congrats on POTD again you are on a roll fine sir!

Silent One
Date: 8/3/2020 9:56:00 AM

Thank you John

Michael Tor

Date: 8/2/2020 7:56:00 PM

Creativity follows you my friend it is she. Now I know your talent secret. Where can I find one like her? Enjoyed reading Silent One.

Silent One
Date: 8/3/2020 9:56:00 AM

Thank you Michael..

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/2/2020 4:38:00 PM

"In her reflection - I am poetry" Whether this is a metaphor, or not. The reflection that she creates, clearly makes you a poet. Your words Shine. Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Silent One
Date: 8/3/2020 9:57:00 AM

Thank you Brandy.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/2/2020 2:40:00 PM

Oh your always poetry, what else could you be. Charming ? yes POTD yes !

Silent One
Date: 8/3/2020 9:57:00 AM

Thank you Pixie..

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/2/2020 1:28:00 PM

Congrats on POTD with this lovely piece--vivid metaphors. Janice

Silent One
Date: 8/2/2020 2:15:00 PM

Thank you..