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In Good Stead

On the first part of the journey,
I’m chewing nice toasty bread
all my toys down below me, 
dog’s ripping them to shreds 
This new world’s a mixture of fun, 
stitched together between dread
And with happy ever after endings, 
hard to see any troubles ahead 

Days appear to get longer, 
empty space grows and spreads
Old people I know disappearing,
as monoliths pop up instead 
Time for a proper education,
my hands are swollen and red
Teacher beats me badly each day, 
says be better if I never bred

Carpet frays beneath my feet,
so I decide to follow the thread
path’s becoming ever clearer, 
like all halfwits I’m easily led
And the priest keeps on rocking, 
I think he’s glad Elvis is dead 
Dad shouts your getting a job, 
lazy bastard get out of bed 

In the abattoir each morning, 
I spilt blood til my fingers bled
DANGER! sign above the kill box 
no way the cow’s could’ve read
On my way home at twilight, 
a bomb goes off inside my head
Stroke of luck your right vision’s left, 
the optimistic doctors said

Time heals all except aging, 
chairs turn into curved sleds 
Rocking away on the porch now 
unaware about being misled 
But I don’t care cos I’m happy, 
a side effect of miracle meds
Sublingual strips, work wonders, 
journey’s over, again spoon fed

By
David Kavanagh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 1/10/2023 10:34:00 PM
Nuances in time. Raw details . Intense passages of time . Aging with a smile on your face… and those miracle meds ! Poignant words and emotions at play . Love it David ! Susan :)
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David Kavanagh
Date: 1/11/2023 2:20:00 AM
Thank you Susan, I’m delighted you commented on this one in particular, and totally get it, life is difficult, life is easy, depending on how our minds perceive what’s actually going on around us, at any given time, cheers David
Date: 1/9/2023 10:25:00 AM
So profound and written in a way that I could never manage to think of!! Great poem, David
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Date: 1/9/2023 12:36:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, it’s probably a good thing, not to think up poems about life in this particular way, but hey I just went with the flow in a perhaps perverse way, cheers David
Date: 1/6/2023 9:14:00 AM
a tale of a life's journey of growth, biology always wins. I think it's a fit for Hilo Poets CASH contest, maybe you can make some $ back --Las Vegas losses? Lol Great to see Jenna back!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 1/6/2023 10:34:00 AM
Heya Anaya, a brief journey through life’s insanity, with foresight and hindsight perhaps, or a midlife crisis, I’m not sure about Hilo’s contest, think I’ll steer clear of Vegas for a while, yeah I’m delighted Jenna got reinstated, justice prevailed at last, cheers David
Date: 1/6/2023 7:47:00 AM
David, you have an ingenious way of blending the sublime with the profound, interspersed with actuality. They're best suited to be read slowly in order to take in and digest the total significance of your concept. In other words... getting old sucks.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 1/6/2023 8:26:00 AM
Hey Jenna long time no see, delighted you have freedom of speech back, getting old’s certainly not ideal, the journey though is a very strange process, I’m perhaps looking at it as learning lessons the hard way, some were brutally honest, others through deceit, but it was fun looking at the dog ripping my toys to pieces, they were worse for wear anyway, cheers David
Date: 1/5/2023 4:05:00 PM
Enjoyed this, David - well done!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 1/5/2023 4:19:00 PM
Thanks Jeff, no explanation required, more for counterintuitive effect, cheers David

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