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In Gentle Night - Valentine's Collection

(Valentine's Collection) 6. In gentle night Luna's light shines delight does sing My Valentine your divine heart does shine with joy Now by love's shore I implore you adore love's song Now together we weather storms feather light dreams Delight does sing Luna's light shines In gentle night 14/01/2019. (The last verse was deliberately wrong for I wanted to end the piece with the last verse being the first verse upside down. My choice)

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/17/2019 6:12:00 PM

I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/15/2019 2:04:00 AM

So well written Mike, a very romantic verse. Tom.

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/15/2019 9:57:00 AM

Hi Tom, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my Than-Bauk, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. This one was difficult to do. I always have such trouble with short forms. The first verse is the one that took the most time. I had to be able to turn it over at the end. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/14/2019 5:55:00 PM

Another beauty! So nice! :)

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/15/2019 9:45:00 AM

Hi Heidi, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my Than-Bauk. it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I found it difficult to do this one. The Than-Bauk is not a form associated with love. Still, I thought I would give it a try. Still upon the journey. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/14/2019 4:40:00 PM

Gentle, together now..beautiful poem.

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/15/2019 9:32:00 AM

Hi Vijay, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my Than-Bauk, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The journey continues, another poem, another form, the heart sings into a Valentine's dream. This form was quite difficult for me. The Than-Bauk form is not one usually associated with love. have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Jan Allison

Date: 1/14/2019 3:55:00 PM

oh so so beautiful Mike and I LOVE the clever way you ended the poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/15/2019 9:09:00 AM

Hi Jan, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my Than-Bauk, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I found this one hard to write. You know me and short forms. The first verse was the most difficult to do. I had to be able to turn it for the end of the liece. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX