In Endless Moments Waking

In endless moments waking Alone she sits at twilight to dream of shimmered lace While staring at the moonlight reflecting on her face The winds of change are brewing through evergreens they call To question what she’s doing believing in it all Her heart begins to travel with wishes sent a far As boundaries unravel to touch the farthest star She floats on wishes sharing so soft upon a wing While in the dark she’s staring to futures it may bring She knows it’s disappearing for night is soon to end The daylight she is fearing a morning comes to send Until the dawn is breaking her eyes they cast a glow In endless moments waking that only she can know
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Jones Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 11:54 PM
She floats on wishes sharing so soft upon a wing While in the dark she’s staring to futures it may bring This is brilliant and my mind wonders about her beyond what you wrote. Good job.
Green Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 2:44 PM
I truly do appreciate you stopping by and reading and commenting on so many of my poems. Thank you again.
Chiri Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 11:42 PM
Again I remember you writing this one too!;) ah the memories and thank you Chris! You friendship means a lot! You have inspired me to strive to be better but still I remember this woman who sits up all night...I guess like s butterfly I have emerged with your help! I will forever grateful to you!;) my bestie! Haha! I do hope life has improved for you my friend! Now let me see if you has written any more for me! Ahhh I do remember one telling me it's always nice to dream!;) thank you;)
Green Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Thank you Brenda for your kindness always. I am happy if I helped you with your writing but I always knew you were a fantastic poet, I don't think you needed my help but if I was, then I am happy.
Romios Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 8:02 AM
Chris~ too beautiful to even comment on almost. Such magical imagery! I am at a loss for words, Looking forward to reading more. Love, Panagiota,
Green Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 9:01 AM
Thanks so very much for your kind words.
Vangaveti Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 9:17 AM
This touched my soul :)
Green Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 9:02 AM
Thank you, I am happy you liked it
Roper Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 8:04 PM
the imagery of her and her surrounds are beautiful my friend... like always a fantastic write.
Kiser Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 1:51 PM
A beautiful, loving write; congrats.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 2:04 PM
Hello Chris, this poem has touched me as I read it. I had a warm feeling after i read it. Peace , Love, Joy.
Horsman Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 8:14 AM
The comments a hard act to follow, the poetry, even harder....love this Chris.
Green Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 7:42 AM
Thanks so much Harry
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 3:48 PM
So beautiful Chris. Congratulations on having this beauty honored with POTW! xxoo
Green Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 7:42 AM
Thank you Connie
Hamilton Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 5:18 PM
Congrats Chris on POTW must have missed the memo somehow... Cheers!
Awtry Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 1:37 AM
This is a beautiful poem! Congratulations on your POTW honors :)
Ifeanyichukwu Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 10:15 PM
Hi Chris, I so much love your poem, it's constructions are good and it's dictions are appropriate. Good poem , I enjoyed it.
Onclaud Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 3:22 PM
fascination is the word... cheers to you for the POW award, chris!..huggs
Green Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 3:24 PM
Thanks so much nette
Wolf Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 10:45 PM
Magical -- and may the magic never end, even come the dawn! A gem, my friend...Poetry wishes, Gershon
Green Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 7:21 AM
Thanks so much my friend.
Y. Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 12:09 AM
Hi Chris, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the week:-) Alexis
Green Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 7:25 AM
Thank you so much my friend. I appreciate your kindness towards me.
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January 14, 2019 at 8:19 AM
Beautiful! x
Green Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:59 AM
Thanks so much my friend.
Wise Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 7:30 AM
In a word.....fantastic! :)
Green Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:59 AM
Thanks Michael. I appreciate your kind thoughts.
Rushing Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 6:57 AM
Congratulations Chris on POTW! A lovely poem most deserving.
Green Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:58 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
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January 13, 2019 at 10:43 PM
Wow, look what I've missed. A poem of the week and I read it three times before I even noticed that in the comments. This really is a special poem, Chris. From twilight till dawn, she is absorbed in thought. It's almost like trying to guess what the Mona Lisa was thinking. So provocative and the flow is incredibly smooth. A fave for me. Hugs, carolyn
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January 17, 2019 at 5:54 PM
Sometimes a poem like this can take a person's breath away. I had to read it once more as you have been on my mind. Just hope you're doing well, Chris
Green Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:58 AM
Thank you Carolyn, again and again for always bringing a smile to my face with your wonderful comments on my work.
Nicole Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 7:37 PM
This touched my heart and moments feel so real to me, as if I have caressed them before. Perhaps in a poem, could be in a dream. Congratulations Chris, on Poem of the Week. ~ Brandy
Green Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:57 AM
Thank you so very much Brandy for you beautiful comment on my poem. I am happy you liked this one.
Roper Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 1:54 PM
Congratulations on Poem of the week, Chris:).. Hugs Eve ~`*
Green Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:57 AM
Thanks so much Eve.
Allison Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 1:43 PM
dropping back with my congrats on POTW:-) hugs Jan xx
Green Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:56 AM
Thank you Jan
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 1:12 PM
This is a lovely poem sharing your lady's pensive thoughts Chris. BIG Congratulations on having it deservedly honored for POTW my friend! : ) xxoo
Green Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:56 AM
Thank you Connie. I am thrilled you liked this one. As always, your kindness makes me smile
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January 13, 2019 at 12:39 PM
It seems her night is more fascinating than her day...At night She can reach the brightest star..and she can feel the moon casting its glow..At night She can dream...and a dream is something nobody can take away...How amazing and beautiful your poem is..How wonderful to travel on a wing...across the moon and stars...Well deserved potw.
Green Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:56 AM
Thank you Charmaine for always being so kind to me. Your thoughts and words are greatly appreciated.
La France Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 11:20 AM
Chris, congratulations on having your beautiful poem selected as POTW, enjoy the honor ~
Green Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:55 AM
Thank you my friend, I appreciate your visit
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