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In Endless Moments Waking

In endless moments waking Alone she sits at twilight to dream of shimmered lace While staring at the moonlight reflecting on her face The winds of change are brewing through evergreens they call To question what she’s doing believing in it all Her heart begins to travel with wishes sent a far As boundaries unravel to touch the farthest star She floats on wishes sharing so soft upon a wing While in the dark she’s staring to futures it may bring She knows it’s disappearing for night is soon to end The daylight she is fearing a morning comes to send Until the dawn is breaking her eyes they cast a glow In endless moments waking that only she can know

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Date: 10/6/2021 11:54:00 PM
She floats on wishes sharing so soft upon a wing While in the dark she’s staring to futures it may bring This is brilliant and my mind wonders about her beyond what you wrote. Good job.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/7/2021 2:44:00 PM
I truly do appreciate you stopping by and reading and commenting on so many of my poems. Thank you again.
Date: 9/12/2019 11:42:00 PM
Again I remember you writing this one too!;) ah the memories and thank you Chris! You friendship means a lot! You have inspired me to strive to be better but still I remember this woman who sits up all night...I guess like s butterfly I have emerged with your help! I will forever grateful to you!;) my bestie! Haha! I do hope life has improved for you my friend! Now let me see if you has written any more for me! Ahhh I do remember one telling me it's always nice to dream!;) thank you;)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/13/2019 7:30:00 AM
Thank you Brenda for your kindness always. I am happy if I helped you with your writing but I always knew you were a fantastic poet, I don't think you needed my help but if I was, then I am happy.
Date: 3/12/2019 8:02:00 AM
Chris~ too beautiful to even comment on almost. Such magical imagery! I am at a loss for words, Looking forward to reading more. Love, Panagiota,
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Chris Green
Date: 3/12/2019 9:01:00 AM
Thanks so very much for your kind words.
Date: 2/25/2019 9:17:00 AM
This touched my soul :)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/12/2019 9:02:00 AM
Thank you, I am happy you liked it
Date: 2/23/2019 8:04:00 PM
the imagery of her and her surrounds are beautiful my friend... like always a fantastic write.
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Date: 2/9/2019 1:51:00 PM
A beautiful, loving write; congrats.
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Date: 2/4/2019 2:04:00 PM
Hello Chris, this poem has touched me as I read it. I had a warm feeling after i read it. Peace , Love, Joy.
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Date: 1/31/2019 8:14:00 AM
The comments a hard act to follow, the poetry, even harder....love this Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/1/2019 7:42:00 AM
Thanks so much Harry
Date: 1/26/2019 3:48:00 PM
So beautiful Chris. Congratulations on having this beauty honored with POTW! xxoo
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Chris Green
Date: 2/1/2019 7:42:00 AM
Thank you Connie
Date: 1/21/2019 5:18:00 PM
Congrats Chris on POTW must have missed the memo somehow... Cheers!
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Date: 1/19/2019 1:37:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem! Congratulations on your POTW honors :)
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Date: 1/18/2019 10:15:00 PM
Hi Chris, I so much love your poem, it's constructions are good and it's dictions are appropriate. Good poem , I enjoyed it.
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Date: 1/18/2019 3:22:00 PM
fascination is the word... cheers to you for the POW award, chris!..huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 1/18/2019 3:24:00 PM
Thanks so much nette
Date: 1/16/2019 10:45:00 PM
Magical -- and may the magic never end, even come the dawn! A gem, my friend...Poetry wishes, Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 1/17/2019 7:21:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 1/15/2019 12:09:00 AM
Hi Chris, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the week:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 1/15/2019 7:25:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend. I appreciate your kindness towards me.
Date: 1/14/2019 8:19:00 AM
Beautiful! x
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Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2019 10:59:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 1/14/2019 7:30:00 AM
In a word.....fantastic! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2019 10:59:00 AM
Thanks Michael. I appreciate your kind thoughts.
Date: 1/14/2019 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations Chris on POTW! A lovely poem most deserving.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2019 10:58:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 1/13/2019 10:43:00 PM
Wow, look what I've missed. A poem of the week and I read it three times before I even noticed that in the comments. This really is a special poem, Chris. From twilight till dawn, she is absorbed in thought. It's almost like trying to guess what the Mona Lisa was thinking. So provocative and the flow is incredibly smooth. A fave for me. Hugs, carolyn
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/17/2019 5:54:00 PM
Sometimes a poem like this can take a person's breath away. I had to read it once more as you have been on my mind. Just hope you're doing well, Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2019 10:58:00 AM
Thank you Carolyn, again and again for always bringing a smile to my face with your wonderful comments on my work.
Date: 1/13/2019 7:37:00 PM
This touched my heart and moments feel so real to me, as if I have caressed them before. Perhaps in a poem, could be in a dream. Congratulations Chris, on Poem of the Week. ~ Brandy
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Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2019 10:57:00 AM
Thank you so very much Brandy for you beautiful comment on my poem. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 1/13/2019 1:54:00 PM
Congratulations on Poem of the week, Chris:).. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2019 10:57:00 AM
Thanks so much Eve.
Date: 1/13/2019 1:43:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats on POTW:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2019 10:56:00 AM
Thank you Jan
Date: 1/13/2019 1:12:00 PM
This is a lovely poem sharing your lady's pensive thoughts Chris. BIG Congratulations on having it deservedly honored for POTW my friend! : ) xxoo
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Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2019 10:56:00 AM
Thank you Connie. I am thrilled you liked this one. As always, your kindness makes me smile
Date: 1/13/2019 12:39:00 PM
It seems her night is more fascinating than her day...At night She can reach the brightest star..and she can feel the moon casting its glow..At night She can dream...and a dream is something nobody can take away...How amazing and beautiful your poem is..How wonderful to travel on a wing...across the moon and stars...Well deserved potw.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2019 10:56:00 AM
Thank you Charmaine for always being so kind to me. Your thoughts and words are greatly appreciated.
Date: 1/13/2019 11:20:00 AM
Chris, congratulations on having your beautiful poem selected as POTW, enjoy the honor ~
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Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2019 10:55:00 AM
Thank you my friend, I appreciate your visit
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