In Defense of the Guardian

While the guardian of night watches a looming thunderstorm , the power of his animus defends earthy home and a village’s turf with grit… and in the stillness of a child or wife’s rest, when twitching snaps of a labor’s chime rings out, this protector aches for respect and admiration to forge ahead into gateways of Olympian struggles; molded like so by creation’s decree. Though labeled as a dominant ruler , it is his gentle side that comforts all: lending a compassionate hand, affirming a woman’s essence, and thirsting to reveal human frailties without question. Knowingly ,the peg behind the guardian of nights is home's queen, fueling a determined will and affectionate spirit by validating his man’s untiring role…without question. 7/8/2015 Patriarchy Contest Sponsor: Thomas Martin
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A. Sharma Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 10:34 PM
Superb write nette that's worthy of great win! Big congrats!
A  Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 12:01 AM
Nette, congratulations. Forever **SKAT**
Lawless Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 3:50 PM
Enjoyed this one Nette, thanks.
Bateman Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 2:05 PM
Nette, Excellent work in every respect!! Congratulations on POTD!! Cheers and Best Wishes
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 1:45 AM
Wow! Congratulations on have this excellent poem selected for POTD Nette!
Konos Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 8:43 AM
A poem of precision and just think created while faced with threatening Storms. I honestly don't know how you do it but Congratulations on this beauty.....
Manassian Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 11:24 PM
Nette, congrats on being POTD with this wonderful piece about the wonderful nature of man. He is a wonderful creation, indeed. This is beautiful, dear.
Nunez Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 10:49 PM
This is so sensitive and beautiful Nette. You've touched both on the man's strength and softer side. Congrats on POTD! hugs!
Harding Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 9:02 PM
Excellent! Gives such a feeling of honor and strength.7+!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 4:47 PM
Wonderful, Nette! A great man is a strong protector but can still be gentle and compassionate. Congrats on TPOD...I enjoyed reading this today! Hugs, Rhonda
Fleming Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 3:07 PM
Congratulations, Nette! I enjoyed the read. All the very best!! :) john.
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 2:14 PM
- Dear Nette, congratulations on your beautiful poem - A pleasure to see that it is today's poem !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 9:23 AM
Nette, poem of the day!! yippee!~Olive Eloisa
La France Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 8:59 AM
Nette, congratulations on having this beautiful write selected as Poem Of The Day, enjoy the honor
Roper Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 8:07 AM
Beautiful write, Nette, congratulations on Poem of the day. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 6:58 AM
dropping back to say congrats on Poem of the Day:-) Hugs jan xx
Parker Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 9:34 PM
Validation comes when one can give without taking, share without receiving, understand without judgment, lift a sad heart with compassion and be as one spirit crossing the eternities..my first thought after reading this thought provoking poem
Lawless Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 6:48 PM
WOW, Nette, I think my heart just grew two sizes...a splendid portrayal of the complexities of being men and women.
Onna Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 3:13 PM
There are lots of good, loving men around despite their need to be dominant.It's in the genes! Dashing piece of poetry!
Martin Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 2:49 PM
Well written, Nette! Enjoyed this! Tom
Smith Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 2:47 PM
It is nice to be comforted by the strength of a man while in the midst of a storm...lovely nette
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 2:38 PM
may you ever be protected Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Christian Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 2:30 PM
lovely write
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