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In blissful repose - SHM

Fragrance of a rose, within our heart grows, soul feeling each sigh, with a mindful eye, blissful in the boat, that God Himself rows, flowing in free float, bidding fears goodbye. Love’s readymade, in God’s heavenly glade, where vibrant and aglow, in stillness slow, with debts repaid, in stream of joy we wade, soul steps retrace, till who we are we know. There’s nothing we do as bliss beats renew, treating with affection, both friend and foe, our aura glistens like fresh morning dew, as breath by breath we feel God’s grace endow. Simple is the path, we so tread upon ~ Weaving thread of love, each moment reborn path we tread upon debts repaid in joy we wade ~ weaving thread of love fragrance of rose within heart grows ~ blissful in the boat God Himself rows

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Date: 1/6/2024 2:48:00 PM
Awesome. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/6/2024 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, dear Silent One
Date: 1/2/2024 9:08:00 AM
A wonderful write, Seeker. I love this. A perfect monoku at the end! Congratulations on your top win! Happy New Year, my friend! Charlie
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Date: 1/2/2024 6:53:00 PM
Thanks for hosting, Charlie and posing this delightful challenge. Have a great year ahead
Date: 11/18/2023 2:54:00 PM
a truly captivating Sonnet! As I read it, I felt uplifted and reassured knowing that with mindfulness I can glide in God's boat blissful allowing him to row. Beautiful words.. I especially liked the summary line. As Lin said, I feel 'blissful.' :-) smiles, Sara
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Date: 11/18/2023 5:39:00 PM
Ah ~ Lin was just having a friendly dig at me, since I tend to use the word ‘bliss’ in almost all my poems :) happy you enjoyed, Sara
Date: 11/18/2023 7:05:00 AM
So very well written, Seeker. Shall we say... blissful ;-)
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Date: 11/18/2023 7:30:00 AM
Hahaha!

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