In Birthday Suit For Poetry

Looking at the mirror in birthday suit poetry I'm ready now just for you, pen in hand,starting from the eyes so cute going down the chest for a poem new a hairy path traversed by hardly few, down the line crazy six packs waiting there a little pause--which way to go from here? Taking courage,further down--moody toy- keep in mind-'To be handled with much care' that's all--now don't call me a naughty boy! ==============000============ Placement:7th; ( May 2012) Contest:Your Birthday Suit Sponsor:Cyndi MacMillan By:kash poet
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Macfarlane Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 8:13 PM
Captivating trail your words does take : ) Congrats on your revelation!
Macmillan Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 8:15 PM
Belated personal congrats on this poem, Kash. Great take on the subject. A little sweet, a little spicey! Way to write! Cyndi
Guzzi Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 3:51 PM
Nawwwww SWEET MAN/ Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Minardi Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 7:18 AM
Congrats, Kash! A very imaginative imagery you wrote here :)
Nair Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 10:16 PM
Congrats to you too, Kash,...I tried to put my pic in..error500 and this blackness is all I got, Jag
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 7:54 PM
YES, good to see this on the list!!! Big congrats. I found this one to be super clever, Kashinath.
Brown Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 7:24 AM
Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "Your Birthday Suit" contest Kash. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 5:00 AM
Congratulations on your birthday suit win Kash would have placed it higher myself, maybe above the six pack ha ha xx
Williams Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 3:01 AM
Kash congrats on your win, David
Minardi Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 8:39 AM
Woohooo... This is just flaming, Kash! Witty and naughty!
Neels Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 12:06 PM
lol, yeah right :) gosh has this contest closed already? love your wit, as always! Thanks for directing me this way --->> Wilma
Breidenthal Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 9:51 PM
BAHAHAH! Loved it. Good luck on the contest! ;) Always, Laura
Song Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 9:46 PM
soup mail*
Wesley Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 11:31 AM
Fetching sight you are Kashi, I could almost fall for the view! The 6 pack would help soften the sensation I think. Lots of fun in this one!
Kapoor Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 8:07 AM
Your beautiful birthday suit would be in great demand Kash. My good wishes for your contest entry. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 9:00 PM
hahaha, but Kash, they could be true!!! (anyway, be glad you are not hairy. Here in the states men are always waxing their chests now!)
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 8:16 PM
hahaha, hilarious, Kash, so you have a six pack and a hairy chest? who'd a thunk it? heehee. YOu must work out at the gym, my friend, and I hope your chest does not resemble robin Williams'!! I really admire you for taking this challenge and actually writing about yourself. It's not easy to do and very few men are doing it!!
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 7:23 PM
LOL...Great write dear poet,this reads like a winner to me....Elliott....
Bauer Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 4:03 PM
very funny! best of luck in the contest!
Devnath  Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 11:51 AM
Wonderful Birthday Suit, loved always, bl
Onclaud Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 10:54 AM
lolol, kashi buddy... naughty, cute piece.. really, 6-pack abs??... much enjoyed with huggs! yowzah!:)
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 10:42 AM
Cute poem for "Your Birthday Suit" - Wish you luck in contes kash! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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