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In Between Easter Eggs

Empty nest had come and gone, Children were not yet, The family get together Was all adult at best. There were no children to play. The hostess felt the pallor, Of nothing much to say, She colluded with one of the men, Sneaking with eggs away. There were no children to play. After the ham and fixin’s, All were invited to ice cream, But there was a big surprise! Hunting eggs was the theme. There were no children to play. They laughed and broke many shells, Even ate a boiled egg or two, Sat down then for a glass of wine, Showing eggs they gathered--a few. There were many old children that played.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/12/2018 8:27:00 AM
This is really clever! The repeated line, changed at the end. Well done. Rhymed really well too. I felt a somewhat ominous undertone about why no children.......very well done...80)
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Date: 3/5/2018 6:59:00 AM
Loved it... not so popular anymore sadly..
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Date: 3/4/2018 7:11:00 PM
Kudos for thinking beyond .. great idea for grown ups to play.. like how you repeated .. no children to play.. then the ending !
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Date: 3/4/2018 2:39:00 PM
Me bodies old, me mind still wants to get out there and do thing, great read! Mick
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Date: 3/4/2018 7:47:00 AM
- Why not ... "adults or old children" should play a little more, Sunlite :) - A lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/4/2018 6:19:00 AM
Oh where did our childhood go, thankfully I've got two grandsons so can join in and not look out of place lol.
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Date: 3/3/2018 7:12:00 PM
Sounds like a gas. no pun intended. Fun stuff Sunlite. I always had more fun dying them, than hiding and finding.
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Date: 3/3/2018 4:23:00 PM
Finding the child within us. I think, as we get older, we grow closer to that child we were and fun is great for all ages. A reminder that soon it will be Easter: celebrated by young and old. Happy Easter, Sunlite.
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Date: 3/3/2018 4:07:00 PM
Children come in all sizes. Delightful poem, Sunlite. Bravo. Happy Easter!!
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Date: 3/3/2018 3:56:00 PM
Oh what a wonderful idea an Easter egg hunt for parents whose 'chicks have flown the nest... can I join I in please xxx hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/3/2018 3:55:00 PM
A sweet and fun poem Sunlite :)
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