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In Bed On Mondays

forgetting all i knew... brought me back to YOU- * you're my soul-shining fragrance- a t i c k l e in the dark lights a spark you’re more than an acquaintance- edges of cliffs have brought me a lift up to your eyes, oh please have patience i’ve ran outdoor aching for more, yet you draw an ace, embrace my face, burn me to the core- ...yeah you burn me to the core- so let's close the door tease me, please me- forget who i was, s q u e e z e me and let me love you because… i need you to breathe, and my need brings r e l i e f- oh, my need brings relief ***chorus*** share with me tomorrow’s sorrows- push me, shove me, as long as you land above me- weekend dances and evening romances, s e c o n d glances from you i shall savor- no party favors, just delicious flavors candy-coated ice cream s u n d a e s- you and me in bed on mondays ** believe in things that come from above… love me, hold me, i know you once told me to let go of my inhibitions without condition- sketch my body then mold me unfold ridiculous and conspicuous situations- i’ve been sold to your miraculous infatuations- beliefs into realities of old fatalities, for i was dead; you brought e a s e to my mortality- trick me into revealing my appealing secret, I have your heart with me - you told me to keep it hidden from all who don’t care to know forbidden LOVE… oh, i can't get enough- -no i can't get enough ***chorus*** share with me tomorrow’s sorrows- push me, shove me, as long as you land above me- weekend dances and evening romances, s e c o n d glances from you i shall savor- no party favors, just delicious flavors candy-coated ice cream s u n d a e s- you and me in bed on mondays oh sweet man... forgetting all i knew- brought me back to YOU ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ revised 1.9.20 -luloo

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Date: 1/13/2020 7:30:00 PM
Helo Lu Loo, well done. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 1/10/2020 5:34:00 PM
Lovely Lu Loo
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Date: 1/10/2020 8:12:00 AM
This was wonderful Luloo. I'd love to hear the melody to this sometime, I'll bet it is just as beautiful as the poem.
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Date: 1/9/2020 5:28:00 PM
I remember this one, I don't recall it exactly but I did feel something was different. What a song Laura!
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