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In Another Lifetime

my throat growls breathless anticipation- - I open your note Never having heard your voice, I will choose?choose to love the way your thoughts vibrate along my sympathetic spine, the intertwining, inclining, irritating, yet, satiating flow of your verbs. perfumed scent wafts from tear stained pages- - euphoria trails Never having touched your skin, I will love you for the comfort tea of your purely honest soul. Even though, I may not call to mind a scent, the musk of your cologne, your adjectives and adverbs, dress and undress my day. tears flow joyfully- - perhaps in another life to be quenched I am ever jealous of your sweet wife, yet, I will always, for love which cares not for the selfish self, leave you happy in her arms. *Form haibun combining haiku and narrative haiku by Charles Henderson narrative by Debbie Guzzi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/18/2011 8:11:00 AM
Many congratulations to you Charles and Debbie on your win in Walayee's contest, way to go...:)
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Date: 5/17/2011 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in Lay's contest Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2011 8:37:00 AM
Great Job Charles, Congratulations on first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/16/2011 11:14:00 PM
there you go, debs and charles... TOPPERS with this unique combo of talent! hefty congrats to both of you! :) huggs!
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Date: 5/16/2011 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Charles
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Date: 5/16/2011 4:23:00 PM
What a wonderful mix of styles, and poets....I bow to the two of you! Well done, Charles!!!
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Date: 5/16/2011 4:22:00 PM
Charles, as I just told Deb, you two did a super job blending the two forms and coming up with a unique and beautifully written poem. Congratulations on taking first place! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/16/2011 4:11:00 PM
Congrats Charles on your first place win in Lay's cool contest with this super entry collab with Debbie ...u guys make a great team luv..enjoy..
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Date: 5/16/2011 3:09:00 PM
Congrats!
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Date: 3/24/2011 6:16:00 AM
See I told you ;) I only have 2 comments! LOL are you still not sorry?
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Date: 3/19/2011 10:29:00 AM
Wonderful experience collaberating thanks so much for the gift of your talent. Light & Love
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Date: 3/17/2011 10:54:00 AM
The two of you have done an Awesome Job. Great writing! lainie
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Date: 3/16/2011 8:57:00 PM
very interesting poem. I too love the anomaly of words. It must have been difficult, but fun to collaborate. Nice job. Julie
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