In A World Where I Do Not Exist

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Poetry/Ottava Rima/In A World Where I Do Not Exist
Copyright Protected, ID 08-1668-268-27
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, August 27, 2024
For the International Contest, In A World Where I do Not Exist
Sponsor, Silent One, Judged 09/07/2024

FIRST PLACE

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And in my dream I am sailing the vastness of earth's waters, I am flying, the wind at my back, the azure sky and moon above. With the freedom of nature all around me, I seek my true north.

                                      Quote by _Constance

 

 
Where I do not exist there is emptiness, a world with no little girl gathering blooms; no child born a poet full of awareness, no dark poems about cemetery tombs. Not a word written of life and all my glooms, oh, terrible to think of no consciousness; and no young woman who painted and hummed tunes. Oh, what of my mom and dad and my grandma; no forest walks holding hands with my grandpa ! My true essence floats in an infinite space, long lush hair floating like a torn tangled dream; I would have no soft skin, rosy cheeks, pale face, no husband who had eyes like emerald green. no verdant views, vaulted trees, vivid sky, place, floating in a void of clouds I think ... I scream. On the tomb no baby name engraved in stone; for my baby boy was never born I moan ! Hummingbirds hover in my hollow chasm, even a speck in void I can find beauty oh, a world with no me is hard to fathom, no complicated, poet often moody. No writing with imagery and phantasm, oh my gosh I would never be on soupy. I ponder existence with no poetry; no fantasy story, no sweet poesy !

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Date: 9/9/2024 12:10:00 PM
Haunting, sad, and intimate... thank God you do exist! Reminds of "its a wonderful life.".. Xoxo
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Date: 9/10/2024 10:07:00 AM
Crystol, thank you for the compliment and comment, Constance
Date: 9/8/2024 1:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win an excellent phone
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Date: 9/8/2024 6:48:00 PM
Karen, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, Constance
Date: 9/8/2024 10:30:00 AM
Amazing poem! Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 9/8/2024 6:49:00 PM
Robert, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, Constance
Date: 9/7/2024 10:57:00 PM
Beautiful, touching poem and a fantastic quote to go along with it. Warmest congratulations on your top win, Constance
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Date: 9/8/2024 6:50:00 PM
Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and quote and for the congratulations, Constance
Date: 9/7/2024 3:11:00 PM
Excellent poem. Congratulations ! :)
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Date: 9/8/2024 6:51:00 PM
Heidi, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, Constance
Date: 9/7/2024 10:03:00 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/quote. Love your angel picture... Have a blessed/fun day with your win......................
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Date: 9/8/2024 6:52:00 PM
Paula, thank you for the compliment, comment and congratulations, Constance
Date: 9/7/2024 9:21:00 AM
Wow. This is amazing. Congrats on a most worthy first place. And a fave.
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Date: 9/8/2024 6:52:00 PM
Andrea, thank you for the compliment, congrats, comment and FAV, Constance
Date: 9/7/2024 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations. Beautifully done. Blessings.
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Date: 9/8/2024 6:53:00 PM
Marilene, thank you for the congratulations and compliment, blessings
Date: 9/7/2024 8:33:00 AM
Love this and what a wonderful quote! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/8/2024 6:54:00 PM
Karen, thank you for the compliment, comment and congratulation, Constance
Date: 9/7/2024 8:21:00 AM
Talented in expression and heartfelt! Congratulations, Constance!
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Date: 9/8/2024 6:55:00 PM
Kim, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, Constance
Date: 9/7/2024 7:34:00 AM
A touching poem, you captured the theme perfectly, how would the world and the soup cope without Constance? I can't imagine that.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 9/8/2024 6:56:00 PM
Silent, thank you for the contest and my awesome placement, and for the nice comment, compliment and congratulations, appreciate, Constance
Date: 8/27/2024 5:30:00 PM
Fantastic alliteration. If you don't get some glory from this, who will? Not me. Way mo' better than mine. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 8/28/2024 3:11:00 PM
Benjamin, thank you so much for the compliment, and comment, appreciate, blessings, Constance
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