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In a Winter Storm

In a winter storm snow blows all over the land to find my driveway.

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Harry Horsman

Date: 3/18/2023 12:27:00 AM

Looking at an oldie here, Vijay, and a special haiku it is too. Love it's 'AI'. Harry

Valsa George

Date: 9/21/2022 5:32:00 AM

Winter is a hard time for those going out for work everyday! To be indoors is pleasant ! A beautiful haiku !

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/26/2017 12:19:00 AM

A really great and relatable Haiku Vijay! Well done :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2017 5:04:00 AM

Thanks Susan!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/24/2017 6:59:00 PM

It's funny how that happens ;) Congrats on being at the top of the best new poet list!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/24/2017 7:13:00 PM

Thanks Kim!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2017 8:42:00 PM

haha, what a great final line on your KU

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/19/2017 9:34:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea.. love your comment!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2017 4:05:00 PM

- A great haiku, Vijay :) - Your first haiku ? - Well done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/19/2017 4:45:00 PM

Yes.. very first.. I have a few more lined up. Thanks Anne-Lise.

Karen Croft

Date: 8/19/2017 12:25:00 PM

great winter poem. thanks for your kind words earlier!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/19/2017 1:00:00 PM

Love your feedback Karen!

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/19/2017 11:28:00 AM

Hi Vijay. To answer your question... I am not on break, I wasn't feeling well yesterday. I am doing a little better today :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/19/2017 11:32:00 AM

Yes--I saw a posting this morning. Glad you are feeling better. Thanks for taking the time to get back to me.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/19/2017 10:10:00 AM

ohh, great juxta and twist in your winter'ku, vijay... very well done; i really dig this one... huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/19/2017 11:29:00 AM

Love your comments, nette--thank you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/19/2017 9:27:00 AM

Since I don't live where it snows very often, I can't relate to this one very much but I have seen pictures..It must be very hard to live in a place where everything disappears under the snow for months at a time..Then again it would be a good time to catch up on some inside hobbies like reading, writing, drawing, and household repairs..Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/19/2017 9:44:00 AM

So true Sara--delighted by your visit and such thoughtful comments!

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/19/2017 6:17:00 AM

What a creative Haiku Vijay. ! I would not have thought of that, yet it is true, how that happens. I love it :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/19/2017 8:12:00 AM

Thanks Heidi--glad you liked it. Are you taking a break--no posting all day?

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/19/2017 6:03:00 AM

Yes it's true, snow always seems to find the driveway no matter if it snowed a little or a lot! Then you can get stuck when trying to get out! This write sure finds the right formula! I really enjoyed reading this grand poem this morning! What a delightful piece it is my friend, Great Work!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/19/2017 8:08:00 AM

So nice to have your lovely feedback Russell!