In a Whimsical Mood

Frilly
Chilly
Hilly
Silly
Willy nilly frilly chilly chin
Loony giddy hilly silly grin



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted for contest WRITE ME A TYBURN sponsored by KIM RODRIGUES -January 22, 2018  -  RANKED 1ST
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Barden Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 8:49 PM
This made me smile, Line, so charming - loved it! Congrats, Friend! :-) <3
Gauthier Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 9:35 PM
Thanks, Gregory. Just letting loose.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 12:46 PM
A giggle-full delight! Congratulations on your win! xomo :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 12:47 PM
Thanks for you visit, Maureen. All the best to you.
Murray Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 1:04 PM
A great fun entry Line. Congratulations.
Gauthier Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 7:57 PM
Thanks, Jean. Much appreciated.
Roper Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 8:38 PM
Back with big congratulations on this great piece, Line :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 10:11 PM
Thank you so much, Eve.
Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 7:51 PM
Loved it then and love it now. Congrats, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 7:54 PM
Thanks again, Andrea. Most appreciated.
Haight Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 6:36 PM
Line, congratulations on your First Place win for this very 'whimsical' Tyburn! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 7:54 PM
Thank you, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Moorman Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 5:50 PM
BRILLIANT!!! I had trouble just finding four words and still didn't make the cut!
Gauthier Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 7:54 PM
O Curtis, thank you for your visit. Next time!
Poteet Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 5:45 PM
No reason not to go all out on the rhyme. Congrats on your WHIMSICAL MOOD, great title.
Gauthier Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 7:52 PM
Thanks for your visit, Reason ;-)
Allison Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 4:55 PM
many congrat Line - I have found 'really' can be 3 syllables on some counters yet it's only two!:-( hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 7:51 PM
Re-al-ly !... That's stretching it! That's re-al-ly cr-a-zy!! Thanks for your visit, Jan. Line xx
Wigley Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 4:36 PM
Haha, whimsy indeed. Congrats on your first place, Line, a worthy win. Regards, Viv
Gauthier Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 7:49 PM
Thank you, Viv. Much appreciated.
Callus Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 3:47 PM
I'm reading this entertaining Tyburn with a grin, Line:) Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul
Gauthier Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 7:49 PM
Thank you, Paul. Much appreciated.
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February 1, 2018 at 2:28 PM
Just a lotta fun, Line! Congrats on 1st place!
Gauthier Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 3:40 PM
Thank you, Kim. Fun to be challenged to try new forms. Much appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 9:07 PM
I hate when the syllable counters do that to us. You are RIGHT on task, Line. WELL DONE. I like this whimsical poem!
Gauthier Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 9:13 PM
Thank you. And all I can add is thank God we have 10 fingers, they surely come in handy at times.
Godwin Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 2:32 AM
Really silly and funny fun to read! Your imagination wrote this with your silly bone. I was entertained! All the best ... CayCay
Gauthier Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Thank you so much for your fun visit, CayCay.
Cresswell Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 2:10 PM
Very silly and I think we all need silly to the max. Well done.
Gauthier Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 3:50 PM
Thank you so much, Patricia. Much appreciated.
Sands Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 9:40 AM
This is a good one. Brought a smile to me :) Good luck in the contest :)
Gauthier Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Thank you, Heidi. A bit of a tongue twister. Great for grandchildren.
Canerdy Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 8:25 AM
Delightful, Line! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 10:56 AM
Thanks, Janice. These silly ones really bring out the kid in us.
Roper Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 12:10 AM
Enjoyed reading,Line.. good luck in the contest .. Hugs eve
Gauthier Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 6:22 AM
Thank you, Eve. Much appreciated.
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