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In a Sunken Garden

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In the sunken garden of love,
Pure water is conserved.
For-get-me-nots grow from above.
Fragrant roses are served.

Love will make our scent sing,
Birds fly and thrill with zing,
I feel i am a king.

Time up says the warden,
In the sunken garden.


Quietus

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Joseph May

Date: 8/16/2022 7:25:00 AM

The serenity of a garden with all the sounds and scents, Very nicely penned Victor

Valsa George

Date: 6/16/2022 7:15:00 PM

Lovely quietus....! Is it a poetic form developed by our poet friend Unseeking Seeker?

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 6/16/2022 10:08:00 PM

Yes. But he is quite at ease with the form.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/17/2022 10:55:00 AM

Peaceful and beautiful Victor! hugs

Anil Deo

Date: 1/12/2022 5:12:00 AM

Brilliant. I'm inspired to research the form and more. Shalom shalom

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/11/2022 3:55:00 PM

It's always a beautiful, tranquil place, a sunken garden; well done.

Judy Ball

Date: 1/10/2022 11:10:00 PM

This is lovely Victor. So peaceful and the pic is perfect. God Bless, JB

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/8/2022 11:07:00 AM

A very serene write Victor and vivid descriptions abound. A Happy 2022 I wish for you, may your dreams be fulfilled. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2022 2:18:00 PM

this is so nice. is there another quietus contest happening?

Eve Roper

Date: 1/7/2022 10:07:00 AM

A place you have describe can make you feel like a king. Well done my friend. hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2022 3:28:00 AM

I really enjoyed this one. Sometimes I think that my garden is sunk but for other reasons like I am too old to tend it now. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 1/7/2022 12:54:00 AM

In a couple of months, my forget me knots will appear, I like the way they have seeded themselves and grow in nooks and crannies. The sunken garden is a nice idea for a poem, conjures up floral magic..Delice

Charles Messina

Date: 1/7/2022 12:43:00 AM

I really enjoyed this, Victor. I like the form too. Iwonder if the younger generation even knows what a for-get-me-not is? Nicely written...

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/6/2022 9:47:00 PM

I'm with you all the way here, Victor, pity it had to end.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/6/2022 9:45:00 PM

You seem to be enjoying this form, Victor, well penned again, love the imagery here:)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/6/2022 7:22:00 PM

Your enchanting poem evokes joy and peaceful feelings, Victor. It is a fave. :)

Bill Baker

Date: 1/6/2022 5:20:00 PM

A very well written romantic poem, Victor. An enjoyable experience to read. Your Texas friend, Bill

Debra L Brown

Date: 1/6/2022 3:04:00 PM

Hello! Victor, As we are experiencing snow, your poetry is a pleasant welcome. I really like the picture you created. Blessing Debra

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/6/2022 1:38:00 PM

Without a doubt you are the King of Romance....Beautiful! Cheers, Paulette

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 1/6/2022 1:45:00 PM

I write dark poems too. Hope you'll like them. They are of course fiction.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/6/2022 1:20:00 PM

This poem is heartwarming and romantic Victor. I loved it! Thank you for putting a smile on my face today. Blessings xxoo

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/6/2022 10:07:00 AM

Victor, you have written another beautiful and touching poem. You are undoubted King of Romance poetry. With this poem, you have definitely won the jackpot. It's one of my favorites.