Victor Buhagiar Poet Verse

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In a Sunken Garden

In the sunken garden of love,
Pure water is conserved.
For-get-me-nots grow from above.
Fragrant roses are served.

Love will make our scent sing,
Birds fly and thrill with zing,
I feel i am a king.

Time up says the warden,
In the sunken garden.


Quietus

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Joseph May August 16, 2022 at 7:25 AM The serenity of a garden with all the sounds and scents, Very nicely penned Victor

Valsa George June 16, 2022 at 7:15 PM Lovely quietus....! Is it a poetic form developed by our poet friend Unseeking Seeker? Victor Buhagiar June 16, 2022 at 10:08 PM Yes. But he is quite at ease with the form.

Tania Kitchin January 17, 2022 at 10:55 AM Peaceful and beautiful Victor! hugs

Anil Deo January 12, 2022 at 5:12 AM Brilliant. I'm inspired to research the form and more. Shalom shalom

M. L. Kiser January 11, 2022 at 3:55 PM It's always a beautiful, tranquil place, a sunken garden; well done.

Judy Ball January 10, 2022 at 11:10 PM This is lovely Victor. So peaceful and the pic is perfect. God Bless, JB

Jennifer Proxenos January 8, 2022 at 11:07 AM A very serene write Victor and vivid descriptions abound. A Happy 2022 I wish for you, may your dreams be fulfilled. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich January 7, 2022 at 2:18 PM this is so nice. is there another quietus contest happening?

Eve Roper January 7, 2022 at 10:07 AM A place you have describe can make you feel like a king. Well done my friend. hugs

Sara Kendrick January 7, 2022 at 3:28 AM I really enjoyed this one. Sometimes I think that my garden is sunk but for other reasons like I am too old to tend it now. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Delice Arleen Skelly January 7, 2022 at 12:54 AM In a couple of months, my forget me knots will appear, I like the way they have seeded themselves and grow in nooks and crannies. The sunken garden is a nice idea for a poem, conjures up floral magic..Delice

Charles Messina January 7, 2022 at 12:43 AM I really enjoyed this, Victor. I like the form too. Iwonder if the younger generation even knows what a for-get-me-not is? Nicely written...

Harry Horsman January 6, 2022 at 9:47 PM I'm with you all the way here, Victor, pity it had to end.

Joanna Daniel January 6, 2022 at 9:45 PM You seem to be enjoying this form, Victor, well penned again, love the imagery here:)

Evelyn Judy Buehler January 6, 2022 at 7:22 PM Your enchanting poem evokes joy and peaceful feelings, Victor. It is a fave. :)

Bill Baker January 6, 2022 at 5:20 PM A very well written romantic poem, Victor. An enjoyable experience to read. Your Texas friend, Bill

Debra L Brown January 6, 2022 at 3:04 PM Hello! Victor, As we are experiencing snow, your poetry is a pleasant welcome. I really like the picture you created. Blessing Debra

Paulette Calasibetta January 6, 2022 at 1:38 PM Without a doubt you are the King of Romance....Beautiful! Cheers, Paulette Victor Buhagiar January 6, 2022 at 1:45 PM I write dark poems too. Hope you'll like them. They are of course fiction.

Connie Marcum Wong January 6, 2022 at 1:20 PM This poem is heartwarming and romantic Victor. I loved it! Thank you for putting a smile on my face today. Blessings xxoo

Sotto Poet January 6, 2022 at 10:07 AM Victor, you have written another beautiful and touching poem. You are undoubted King of Romance poetry. With this poem, you have definitely won the jackpot. It's one of my favorites.

Jan Allison January 6, 2022 at 8:19 AM beautiful and romantic Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Deb M January 6, 2022 at 6:49 AM King Victor of Romance strikes again! Beautiful romantic poem once again Victor. Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen January 6, 2022 at 6:45 AM - ... if you're the King ... I'm the queen :) ... beautifully written, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit January 6, 2022 at 5:44 AM Such beautiful hues in your sunken garden, Victor. Much enjoyed the tone of your poem.

Unseeking Seeker January 6, 2022 at 4:50 AM Wow! Perfecto! What a delightful Quietus, Victor

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