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as cumulus lambs graze in heaven’s blue . . . the wind's sudden howl

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/16/2015 11:46:00 AM
stunning
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Date: 12/11/2014 9:12:00 AM
Hmmm cumulus..an autumn lamb...love..rajat
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Date: 10/23/2014 4:59:00 PM
Nice one Andrea. Want to finish this month off today. love phyl
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Date: 8/27/2014 8:36:00 PM
Love this one, Andrea; very nice haiku which deserves a higher slot. Congrats.
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Date: 8/26/2014 11:29:00 AM
Great imagery Andrea n a huge win! Congrats on ur awesome winning write!
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Date: 8/26/2014 10:56:00 AM
Very imaginative. Wonder what's it doing grazing down at the 4th place?
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/26/2014 6:30:00 PM
hey thanks, I appreciate that!
Date: 8/25/2014 5:09:00 AM
Pleasing scene aptly created with images, Andrea. congrats .
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Date: 8/24/2014 8:21:00 PM
Back again to grats your winner andrea great one :)
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Date: 8/24/2014 6:49:00 PM
Incredible imagery of the lamb grazing - not sure I can eat the little spring lambs ever again after reading this! Great win Hugs jan x
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Date: 8/24/2014 4:32:00 PM
Andrea, please accept my huge congratulations for walking away with this wonderful win in the contest! Excellent write, my friend! Well-deserved! Pandita
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Date: 8/24/2014 3:37:00 PM
Andrea, LOL, I love every line, I guess, I'd be afraid if I were the lamb. Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/12/2014 6:20:00 AM
Wow, a real haiku!!
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Date: 8/5/2014 8:53:00 PM
Love the picture of the stalker and the stalked, so far above...this should do well
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Date: 8/5/2014 4:39:00 AM
oh yes i read this and see the picture, yet then another and another, roll off the imagination, this is indeed clever poetry...
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Date: 8/3/2014 7:31:00 AM
Beautiful! You have expressed so much in so few lines. I love watching clouds as they continually change.
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Date: 8/1/2014 2:04:00 PM
Super genius pen on clouds. Cumulus, one of my favorite types. mY mom used to call me the Grazing Lamb and dinner time. My Last name had people of all sorts making Lamb noises at me back in school. San AndreaS, I am fortunate to have you reading my poems and to be able to hear yours. Please do keep corresponding with me on our journey through creativity....Thank you sooo much
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Date: 8/1/2014 7:37:00 AM
A brilliant write my dearest friend Andrea. I love the very beautiful image of cumulus lamb grazing in heaven's blue. I'm sure our dearest friend PD will love this as much as I do. Thank u so much. Good luck and God bless! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 7/31/2014 11:09:00 AM
Nice picture. I can see the lamb clearly. Love, daver
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Date: 7/31/2014 9:25:00 AM
BAM!!!.... Omg! I love this, Andrea!.. Hugs.. And gl in the contest!.. Arlene
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Date: 7/30/2014 2:01:00 AM
Very creative, Andrea. Good thin there is a great shepherd in heavens blue to protect that lamb. I enjoyed this one, my friend.... Robert.
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Date: 7/29/2014 11:50:00 PM
Wow...the lamb from heaven....hugs Tim
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Date: 7/29/2014 11:01:00 PM
Nice images in this short work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/29/2014 10:44:00 PM
I like it. a vivid picture with a grey wolf howling.....
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Date: 7/29/2014 10:24:00 PM
This really is awesome Andrea! good luck in contest dear!
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Date: 7/29/2014 9:24:00 PM
Yes! You are still writing tremendous poems here just like this masterpiece here my friend! I have missed you all, what a grandiose write Andrea, Great Work!!
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