In a Pickle

All alone and wanting a bite to eat,
she made herself a special treat,
but needed the finishing touch,
and that was to add a pickle...
all the while thinking,
they can be very fickle...
Grabbing a new jar,
trying to screw the lid off,
she twisted and she let out a shout; 
"This is like trying to break into Fort Knox!"
And also wishing that she had a nickle for
every time she tried to pry open
a jar of pickles!
Feeling frustrated and dismayed,
when she turned to put away
the jar of pickles that day,
she was stunned to find
a large jar of nickles..
with a note on it saying:
Now if you can open this jar,
here are some nickles
to buy you
one of those
rubber grip gizmos!
P.S. And some more pickles!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Timperley Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 6:41 AM
Lovely little romper. Enjoyed reading it. As for the jammed jar. Simply upturn it, bang it down hard but not too hard on a hard surface, upright it and voila! God Bless. D.
Stebbings Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 12:41 PM
Ha, Ha, Ha, very good cheryl. Enjoyed reading that piece. Barry
Hoffman Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 6:18 PM
Glad I could make you chuckle a little Barry!:)
Hoffman Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 6:38 AM
Thank you, I'm glad to cheer you up with some of my silly poetry!:)
Gazbowski Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 10:55 PM
Ah Cheryl, I know the frustration you feel when trying to open a jar. Thanks for the chuckles :-)
Hoffman Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 6:21 PM
I know…like I said in the poem it is almost like trying to break into Fort Knox!:) I've even tried running the jar under hot water and to no avail at times!!:(
Gazbowski Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 3:04 PM
I like what you've done Cheryl, more chuckles !
Hoffman Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 7:26 AM
Yes, quite! I added some more lines to this poem because didn't care much for the ending!:) Glad I made you smile!
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