In a Perfect World

An idyllic Saturday evening scene-
on our street, little kids play
‘touch and go’.  Excited shrieks
and laughter warm the chilled February air, 
pavement alive with little feet's patter.

My neighbor’s Golden Labrador does it again: 
he slips out just as his owner 
drives through the tall, wide open iron gate.

Marley runs after the laughter-
playful, in his ferocious way.
Neighbor stops, engine idling, 
and looks intently as a frightened child, 
no more than ten, runs screaming in terror.

In hot pursuit, teeth bared, barking
with all his might, Marley obviously
enjoys the chase. I command the dog to stop
as I reach the child, his body trembling. 
I look at my neighbor's eyes - waiting.
He lowers his lashes, shifts the gear, 
tells his help to get Marley, and goes on his way. 

In a perfect world,  a little child would not know 
the meaning of terror and passive cruelty,
all in one breath.  He would not have to feel 
less valued than a pricey, crossbreed dog.



17 February 2016
Catie Lindsey's In a Perfect World Contest
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Agustin Avatar
December 19, 2024 at 8:36 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Beaufort Avatar
March 29, 2024 at 9:58 AM
KP, I don't know if you will see this. Your poem has a lot of meaning. The priorities of some could use a little adjustment. As you point out, the way people drive reveals a lot about personality and the feeling about other people vs entitlement. Very interesting.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 3:49 PM
Dropping by to say hi.
Ellis Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 8:09 PM
Such a Beautiful View from here... Your words are like photos Carefully framed for prosperity
Terry Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 5:25 PM
Where have all the poets gone?
Ellis Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 3:27 AM
I can see the beauty in each line
Lamoureux Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 7:26 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Your presence is missed here at the soup.
Wigley Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 3:03 AM
A fine write, Kim, hope you're ok. Viv x
Italy Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 7:25 AM
Where she is now?
Proehl Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 5:53 PM
Hi KP, I agree no one should live in fear especially children. Was your poem inspired by actual events? I am a dog lover but I also feel that owners are responsible for their pets and should not take that responsibility passively. I hope to read more of your poems. Best wishes, JP
Fleming Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 2:29 AM
Wherever you should be, Kim, I fervently hope you are safe and content! May you have a wonderful New Year..."Lest we should forget". Stay happy, and...God bless! :) john
Meade Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 11:15 PM
Hey stranger, hope you are well. stop by sometime. Merry Christmas!
Nayak Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 8:06 AM
What an emotive write, so touching....a 7! Dear Kim, how are you? Missing you on Poetry soup....come back soon with your poems,lots of my love and prayers, take care// love, Anu:)
Onclaud Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 5:04 PM
you're back, kim... this is a deep write from an observant eye; love the last stanza for its emotional impact...missed you and huggs
Inman Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 1:18 PM
Kim, a wonderful write. You've made a profound statement here.
Fleming Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 2:00 AM
I have not seen anything of you for quite sometime, Kim...I most fervently pray you are well and happy. Whoever your God is...May he bless and protect you. Your good friend always. :) john
Atfield Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 10:03 PM
It has been a while !!! Have wondered about your smile ??? Stopped by to catch a glimpse of some gems sparkling in the midnight hour. I do not understand the essence of some comments for it seems as though you have been quite proficient in production - last year as well as this .
Terry Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 11:42 AM
Kim, I am concerned for your health. If you are well, please post a message so all your friends on poetry soup can be assured of your wellbeing. You are greatly missed. It would be a shame to lose such a gem. In any case, I hope you are still writing your thought provoking poems. hugs and wishes for happiness are being sent your way. Janece
Muideen Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 5:01 PM
What keep you busy KIM?......Miss You.
Manzon Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 3:17 AM
The display of the cruelties of poverty in our poverty plagued nation. Keep it up Kabayan! Brilliant.
De La Luna Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 6:27 AM
Crazy lovely Kim, I missed you and your words so I paid a visit! Only to know you have been missed by your good friends here! I wish you beautiful days and please come back ??
Lindley Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 2:28 PM
STELLAR WORK, STRONG AND CLEAR WITH A TRUE MESSAGE AND GREAT WISH! a7
Allison Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 5:52 PM
It would be a perfect world to see you back with us Kim:-) hugs jan xx
Muideen Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 4:55 PM
With the read here, I see that it's quiet a long time you have written; however, is it all well with you? I hope you to put down something very soon. Miss you............A.M.
Fleming Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 11:41 AM
I have not see you for a while, Kim...Hope everything is okay. I will take this opportunity to wish you all the very best...And a peaceful and content Easter this holiest of days. Your friend always! :) john
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