In a Perfect World

in a perfect world we would be born live and love then gracefully die © Harry J Horsman 2016

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Joe Maverick

Date: 6/3/2016 2:46:00 PM

And yet now I know earthly death, is but a rebirth, and to be there, with the perfect one is in the fullest grace.' avoid all I advise; the foolish parody of the worlds wisdom, accept the creator and redeemer while you are on the way.'

Funom Makama

Date: 5/26/2016 1:18:00 PM

A wonderful piece. I love this beautiful share

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/21/2016 4:19:00 PM

In its imperfections still abounds much joy if only in tiny moments in life when we see life through the eyes of a curious child..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Red Fiery

Date: 3/7/2016 9:33:00 PM

yes..only in a perfect world...you have depicted my emotions here...Alas! real life is so different...great write !

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/3/2016 8:49:00 PM

Well-said, Harry. Janice

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/3/2016 8:46:00 PM

Well-said, Harry. Janice

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/3/2016 8:42:00 PM

Well-said, Harry. Janice

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/29/2016 6:53:00 AM

with dignity intact. Nicely said.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2016 8:29:00 PM

Hi, Harry, again wanted to tell you how lovely this one was. I think it is one of my favorites of yours this new year.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/25/2016 5:43:00 AM

Reads like a winner..Way to go..There is no perfection on this earth now but someday that miracle will happen..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/19/2016 4:01:00 AM

Dear Harry Horseman Short and sweet, you put it all in a nut shell my friend, great job enjoyed the read tonight, I think of us would love to be in your perfect world, and thanks also for your review on my dallas cowboy poem, cheri

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2016 6:33:00 PM

YOurs was very short and mine was very long and I think neither of us made the cut. But I sure enjoyed this one, Harry.