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In a Perfect World

Now, I grant you, I am just an ant I get along with other ants We make our home among the plants. We work all day in harmony A perfect world, I'd have to say! Some might think I'm here to rant about my size. They may surmise that I'm not smart enough to realize how perfect my small world could be if humans cared enough for me We try so hard to keep away from peril, stress and YOU each day But now and then we stray across the sidewalk or a path you take. You never look or seem to know you've smashed us with a heel or toe! You hoe your weeds. Our meager needs are compromised by seeds you sow! The homes we've built, and eggs we've laid are pulverized with mower blades! A perfect world for you and me would be to end this genocide! You stay inside….I'll stay outside We'll get along. And side by side we'll both reside quite happily !!
___________________________________________________________ Submitted for "In A Perfect World" contest Sponsor: Catie Lindsey 2/12/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Keogh Jr. Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 6:17 PM
Great write Carrie. It has been a while, but I am glad you are still here. Rgards, Gerard
Gupta Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 9:48 AM
A fine representation of the desirably perfect world...
Mark Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 3:24 AM
Carrie, you should feel cheated, indeed, like you I read the blog and figured , why not go the extra mile and see what happens....alas poor Catie reneged on her wish list,...hold your head up kid, this ticked all the " out" boxes,...well done you....Mark
Richards Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 9:52 AM
I thank you for the encouragement, Mark !! At least I placed !!
A. Sharma Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 1:10 AM
Awesome poetry n win Carrie.. big congrats!
Grammatico Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 12:10 AM
Well done, Carrie. Reminds me of the great Sinatra song "High Hopes." Look it up on Youtube if you're of a mind.
Richards Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 9:57 AM
I remember the song...! I think I have it on an old album and yes......! You are right...."you gotta have high hopes" (especially if you are an ant !!! Thanks for the smile!! and the comment!!
A   Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 10:21 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your "Perfect World WIN." LINDA
Gentry Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 5:59 PM
Congratulations on this clever, delightful entry! Enjoyed reading it.
Lane Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 5:57 PM
Love the humor, Carrie. Congratulations on placing in this one.
Scars Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 5:53 PM
Carrie, congrats on your placement in the contest! Very clever! :)-luloo *Smiles*
Alhemaidy Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 1:33 AM
Interesting!
Gorelick Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 6:49 PM
guess this is exactly what she was looking for. Nice! BG
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