In a Perfect World

Now, I grant you, I am just an ant I get along with other ants We make our home among the plants. We work all day in harmony A perfect world, I'd have to say! Some might think I'm here to rant about my size. They may surmise that I'm not smart enough to realize how perfect my small world could be if humans cared enough for me We try so hard to keep away from peril, stress and YOU each day But now and then we stray across the sidewalk or a path you take. You never look or seem to know you've smashed us with a heel or toe! You hoe your weeds. Our meager needs are compromised by seeds you sow! The homes we've built, and eggs we've laid are pulverized with mower blades! A perfect world for you and me would be to end this genocide! You stay inside….I'll stay outside We'll get along. And side by side we'll both reside quite happily !!
___________________________________________________________ Submitted for "In A Perfect World" contest Sponsor: Catie Lindsey 2/12/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 2/19/2016 6:17:00 PM
Great write Carrie. It has been a while, but I am glad you are still here. Rgards, Gerard
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Date: 2/19/2016 9:48:00 AM
A fine representation of the desirably perfect world...
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Date: 2/19/2016 3:24:00 AM
Carrie, you should feel cheated, indeed, like you I read the blog and figured , why not go the extra mile and see what happens....alas poor Catie reneged on her wish list,...hold your head up kid, this ticked all the " out" boxes,...well done you....Mark
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Carrie Richards
Date: 2/19/2016 9:52:00 AM
I thank you for the encouragement, Mark !! At least I placed !!
Date: 2/19/2016 1:10:00 AM
Awesome poetry n win Carrie.. big congrats!
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Date: 2/19/2016 12:10:00 AM
Well done, Carrie. Reminds me of the great Sinatra song "High Hopes." Look it up on Youtube if you're of a mind.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 2/19/2016 9:57:00 AM
I remember the song...! I think I have it on an old album and yes......! You are right...."you gotta have high hopes" (especially if you are an ant !!! Thanks for the smile!! and the comment!!
Date: 2/18/2016 10:21:00 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your "Perfect World WIN." LINDA
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Date: 2/18/2016 5:59:00 PM
Congratulations on this clever, delightful entry! Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 2/18/2016 5:57:00 PM
Love the humor, Carrie. Congratulations on placing in this one.
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Date: 2/18/2016 5:53:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on your placement in the contest! Very clever! :)-luloo *Smiles*
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Date: 2/13/2016 1:33:00 AM
Interesting!
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Date: 2/12/2016 6:49:00 PM
guess this is exactly what she was looking for. Nice! BG
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