In a Perfect World - For Contest

In a Perfect World


In a perfect world we’d need no God
horses hooves would ne’er be shod
nor would the instinct to fight or flee
determine how you’d relate to me.

Each cue ball break would sink your balls
there’d be no whispering in the halls
if every word uttered is true
I wonder what they’d say ‘bout you.

When every woman is a perfect ten
what would make men look again
or cause the woman to entertain
hot fleeting glances all the same.

And if perchance perfection’s choices
damn us all with perfect voices
perfect volume, perfect tone
a perfect, numbing, endless, drone.

Sunrise, sunset, perfect sameness
perfection’s sinners, perfect, blameless
nothing to venture, nothing to gain
‘cuz everything turns out the same.

Everybody shares the wealth
dogs pick up after themselves
hats in boomeranged retreat
returned, and landed, at our feet.

Perfection is its own reward
no need for heaven or its God
angels, idle, listless, dopey
wings - participation trophy.



2/8/2016

submitted to – In a Perfect World – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Catie Lindsey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/22/2016 7:23:00 AM
Perfection is it's own reward... Bravo!.. Congrats on a great win my friend.. A world I would love to live in.. Hugs... Arlene
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Date: 2/20/2016 2:35:00 AM
thank you for the reply to my comment
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Date: 2/19/2016 9:31:00 AM
Really a perfect world poem.......
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:13:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by to comment
Date: 2/19/2016 1:06:00 AM
Awesome poetry n win John.. big congrats!
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:13:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Sharma for your continuing support
Date: 2/18/2016 10:19:00 PM
John, Congrats on your "Perfect World WIN." LINDA
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:12:00 PM
Thanks Linda
Date: 2/18/2016 9:16:00 PM
Congrats on the win, John. Each stanza was a gem.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:12:00 PM
Thanks Steve, appreciate the comment.
Date: 2/18/2016 9:13:00 PM
Well done John, congrats on your win!
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:11:00 PM
Thanks Edward
Date: 2/18/2016 8:08:00 PM
This one is my favorite. Utopia, a word meaning "no place", but not in a good way, usually. Congratulations!
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:11:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Roy, always nice to hear from you
Date: 2/18/2016 5:48:00 PM
Well done rhyming verses for the contest, John. Congratulations.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:10:00 PM
Lin, there are those who believe that in a perfect "poetic" world all poem would rhyme
Date: 2/18/2016 5:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed reading this.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:09:00 PM
Thanks for stopping to read and comment.
Date: 2/18/2016 5:46:00 PM
John, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:09:00 PM
Thanks Laura
Date: 2/8/2016 1:32:00 PM
This is an excellent write, John. You are 100% correct. Love it.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/8/2016 3:07:00 PM
Thanks Daniel for stopping by to read and comment.
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