In a Hotel Room

In a hotel room together, locked behind the door
A king-sized bed and heater, who could ask for more.

The bath is built for two the bubbles already on the bill
Bubble bath for lovers there can be no bigger thrill.

To wash the bubbles from his skin as he steps out in all his glory
Waiting on the bed for me, now there’s another story...

Two lovers meet in hotel rooms the magic goes on and on
To be entwined with the one you love with baby oil for fun.

To make love on the king-sized bed, to make love on the chair
No body is watching just the two of you are there.

Hotel rooms were made for fun not the weary and the tired
What better hobby could one have when one is retired?.

In fact I cannot wait now until I’m old and grey
And just hope these Hotels are open when it’s my retirement day.

© 6/02/2013

Contest Entry : In a hotel room .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/20/2013 10:30:00 AM
a fun and spicy take on the contest theme, congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 2/20/2013 8:55:00 AM
Congrats on your win Mandy! Winning piece for a winning spot :D - hug, yanny
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Date: 2/20/2013 1:35:00 AM
Good job! - Your hotel is 7 star! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/19/2013 8:40:00 PM
this is the happiest and funniest one I've seen so far, going thru the winners list. I love it, Mandy. congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/19/2013 5:11:00 PM
lWow! I've really been missing out in my retirement. Congratulations on a fun entry and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/19/2013 4:15:00 PM
Mandy, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ~ love your awesome winning poem in Susan's contest.. take care.. PD
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Date: 2/19/2013 12:41:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Mandy
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Date: 2/19/2013 9:55:00 AM
congrats Mandy, the imagery so powerful..
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Date: 2/19/2013 7:39:00 AM
Mandy congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/6/2013 7:24:00 AM
is there a cold shower in there?, only to cool down before round two....just love this Mandy,, you are the perfect tease, and i love every word you write
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/6/2013 7:26:00 AM
ha sorry harry my comment there just morphed up from Seren to you but a cold one may help lol xx
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/6/2013 7:25:00 AM
couldn't have you having all the fun with your racy one xx
Date: 2/6/2013 7:12:00 AM
Haha. Well done Mandy, welcome to the racy hotel room poems. Loved it....Seren
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/6/2013 7:26:00 AM
ha couldn't have you having all the fun with your racy room lol xx
Date: 2/6/2013 7:10:00 AM
Ooh la la, you have turned your hotel room into a steam room.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/6/2013 7:27:00 AM
Now that's an idea xx
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