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In a Hotel Room

A fter a long drive we arrive N ice looking hotel reception A feeling of sensual anticipation  U ndue pressures on our emotions G irl  hands over keys to lovers convention H ug you close, touch to please T urning into a wanton tease Y ou open the door to let paradise release W e let our bodies do the talking E motion shaking fingers do the walking E asily we touch to thrill K nowing our love we will fulfill E asing out of our clothes, nerves are seared N estling my breasts with your beard D arling all inhibitions have disappeared A ll feelings of frustration  no longer exist W et with longing for much more than  a kiss A t home our loving was getting staid Y et here we are getting  well and truly laid Just goes to show that a naughty weekend away can spice up your life. Dated 6 February 2013.

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Date: 2/23/2013 4:39:00 PM
Very naughty - love it!
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Date: 2/20/2013 1:32:00 AM
Good job! - Your hotel is 7 star! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/20/2013 5:21:00 AM
haha Anne Lise 7* with extras ...Seren
Date: 2/20/2013 12:09:00 AM
Nice and naughty acoustic. Congratulations on the placement.
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Date: 2/19/2013 8:34:00 PM
The last line was really funny, Seren. I didn't expect it from you!! Congrats on your win. It was nice to finally see what you wrote.
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Date: 2/19/2013 9:27:00 PM
Lol Andrea it rhymed didnt it. Rofl. Dont tell me you think of me as miss perfect.....Seren
Date: 2/19/2013 5:00:00 PM
And should be experienced often. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/19/2013 5:56:00 PM
Wouldnt know the Married bit Joyce, just a vivid imagination i guess and Mills and Boon ...Seren
Date: 2/19/2013 4:14:00 PM
Seren, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ~ love your awesome winning poem in Susan's contest.. take care.. PD
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Date: 2/19/2013 4:47:00 PM
Thanks PD ... Seren
Date: 2/19/2013 3:37:00 PM
Whew! No need for the heater tonight, Seren! Very nice. Congratulations!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/19/2013 4:03:00 PM
lol Roy, will send some ice over...Seren
Date: 2/19/2013 3:31:00 PM
nice job! i love the format you've chosen. congrats on your win...
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Date: 2/19/2013 4:04:00 PM
Thanks so much Ilene...Seren
Date: 2/19/2013 12:39:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Seren
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Date: 2/19/2013 2:11:00 PM
thank you Joseph...Seren
Date: 2/19/2013 8:09:00 AM
Knew this one would place surprised not at the top lol xx
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Date: 2/19/2013 2:12:00 PM
Thanks Mandy ....Seren
Date: 2/19/2013 7:36:00 AM
Seren congrats on your win. Much deserved. Connie
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/19/2013 2:12:00 PM
Thank you Connie....Seren
Date: 2/6/2013 1:54:00 PM
This is a tremendous and fascinating write my friend! I loved each and every line of this terrific poem! What a sensually ecstatic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/6/2013 6:01:00 PM
Thank you Russell, guess it is a bit different...Seren
Date: 2/6/2013 11:54:00 AM
YIKES! All of a sudden, it's gotten extremely warm in here! You much be careful, I'm an old dude! LOL I'm booking my next flight as we speak! Yummy!
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Date: 2/6/2013 6:01:00 PM
Lol Jack, I am sure you can write a funny poem referring to your answer. Let me know time of arrival will meet plane....Seren
Date: 2/6/2013 7:18:00 AM
wow David got here before me, love this Seren, pure poetry, one sees you in many lights, all beautiful
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Date: 2/6/2013 7:22:00 AM
Thanks Harry, you are a true friend. Yep David pipped you at the post, lol, ....Seren
Date: 2/6/2013 7:06:00 AM
and what did you say the name of the hotel was lol...love it....David
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Date: 2/6/2013 7:14:00 AM
Thx David thought I might have shocked you. Hotel Serendipity of course. Lol
Date: 2/6/2013 5:45:00 AM
oh you naughty girl, i just love this, now I see what you meant lol xx bad girl
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Date: 2/6/2013 7:23:00 AM
Lol Mandy, loved your rendering as well, ....Seren
Date: 2/6/2013 4:50:00 AM
Very instructive, constructive, seductive, perhaps reproductive! I gasped at the last line... Terry (good poem)
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Date: 2/6/2013 7:24:00 AM
Oops gasp at being astounded, or hmmm a gasp of omg. Lol

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