In a Hotel Room

A fter a long drive we arrive

N ice looking hotel reception
A feeling of sensual anticipation 
U ndue pressures on our emotions
G irl  hands over keys to lovers convention
H ug you close, touch to please
T urning into a wanton tease
Y ou open the door to let paradise release

W e let our bodies do the talking
E motion shaking fingers do the walking
E asily we touch to thrill
K nowing our love we will fulfill
E asing out of our clothes, nerves are seared
N estling my breasts with your beard
D arling all inhibitions have disappeared

A ll feelings of frustration  no longer exist
W et with longing for much more than  a kiss
A t home our loving was getting staid
Y et here we are getting  well and truly laid





Just goes to show that a naughty weekend away can spice up your life.


Dated 6 February 2013.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dom Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 4:39 PM
Very naughty - love it!
Andresen Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 1:32 AM
Good job! - Your hotel is 7 star! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Roberts Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 5:21 AM
haha Anne Lise 7* with extras ...Seren
Bunch Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 12:09 AM
Nice and naughty acoustic. Congratulations on the placement.
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 8:34 PM
The last line was really funny, Seren. I didn't expect it from you!! Congrats on your win. It was nice to finally see what you wrote.
Roberts Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 9:27 PM
Lol Andrea it rhymed didnt it. Rofl. Dont tell me you think of me as miss perfect.....Seren
Johnson Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 5:00 PM
And should be experienced often. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Roberts Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 5:56 PM
Wouldnt know the Married bit Joyce, just a vivid imagination i guess and Mills and Boon ...Seren
A   Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 4:14 PM
Seren, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ~ love your awesome winning poem in Susan's contest.. take care.. PD
Roberts Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 4:47 PM
Thanks PD ... Seren
Jerden Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 3:37 PM
Whew! No need for the heater tonight, Seren! Very nice. Congratulations!
Roberts Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 4:03 PM
lol Roy, will send some ice over...Seren
Bauer Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 3:31 PM
nice job! i love the format you've chosen. congrats on your win...
Roberts Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 4:04 PM
Thanks so much Ilene...Seren
May Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 12:39 PM
congrats on a fine win Seren
Roberts Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 2:11 PM
thank you Joseph...Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 8:09 AM
Knew this one would place surprised not at the top lol xx
Roberts Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 2:12 PM
Thanks Mandy ....Seren
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 7:36 AM
Seren congrats on your win. Much deserved. Connie
Roberts Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 2:12 PM
Thank you Connie....Seren
Sivey Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 1:54 PM
This is a tremendous and fascinating write my friend! I loved each and every line of this terrific poem! What a sensually ecstatic piece, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 6:01 PM
Thank you Russell, guess it is a bit different...Seren
Ellison Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 11:54 AM
YIKES! All of a sudden, it's gotten extremely warm in here! You much be careful, I'm an old dude! LOL I'm booking my next flight as we speak! Yummy!
Roberts Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 6:01 PM
Lol Jack, I am sure you can write a funny poem referring to your answer. Let me know time of arrival will meet plane....Seren
Horsman Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 7:18 AM
wow David got here before me, love this Seren, pure poetry, one sees you in many lights, all beautiful
Roberts Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 7:22 AM
Thanks Harry, you are a true friend. Yep David pipped you at the post, lol, ....Seren
Williams Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 7:06 AM
and what did you say the name of the hotel was lol...love it....David
Roberts Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 7:14 AM
Thx David thought I might have shocked you. Hotel Serendipity of course. Lol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 5:45 AM
oh you naughty girl, i just love this, now I see what you meant lol xx bad girl
Roberts Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 7:23 AM
Lol Mandy, loved your rendering as well, ....Seren
O'Leary Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 4:50 AM
Very instructive, constructive, seductive, perhaps reproductive! I gasped at the last line... Terry (good poem)
Roberts Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 7:24 AM
Oops gasp at being astounded, or hmmm a gasp of omg. Lol
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