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In a Dark Sky

In a dark sky, an eclectic mix stirs atmospheric storms and persistent winds. Corrupting clouds with mottled mist deters the full force where earth-bound lightening ends. The raging quarrel within the sky trends toward an unsettling sunrise that blurs. Its vibrant color provokes and pretends in a dark sky, an eclectic mix stirs. Heaven meets hell in a banter of slurs. Thunder bolts thrown, as harps make amends. A cacophony of sound that transfers atmospheric storms and persistent winds. Loud blasting burst of screeching crackles tends to mark the blaring argument that stirs with sullen seditiousness, and portends corrupting clouds with mottled mist deters. Solemn skies with gray, granite clouds ensures that torrential rains with whirling winds blends and blurs the power that surely refers the full force where earth-bound lightening ends. Then Susanoo changes his mood and mends the skies together again but confers with gods and goddesses alike then sends winds and thunderbolts as his messengers in a dark sky.

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Date: 3/28/2023 4:49:00 AM
A wonderful Rondeau Linda, a marvellous description of a raging storm and that last stanza is stupendous… Belle :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/28/2023 6:38:00 AM
Thanks dear Belle. I appreciate you taking time to read and comment. :)
Date: 3/27/2023 2:48:00 PM
Hi Linda One of your best. Glad to see you using the sonnet form. I don’t because I do not understand Iambic pentameter, maybe..never will? I know rhyme, syllables but too much I do not know to attempt a sonnet. It can’t be that hard! Huggs, Pangie,xo
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/27/2023 2:54:00 PM
I'm not that good with sonnets either Pangie. Daniel is really good at them. :) Thanks for the encouraging words and comments. :)
Date: 3/27/2023 10:50:00 AM
Hello Linda alice fowler, we got to wa\tch those thunder blots. they can be dangerous. Hugs. /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/28/2023 3:04:00 PM
Hello Linda, yes dangerous but beautiful. Your welcome. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/27/2023 10:52:00 AM
Dangerous, but oh so beautiful. :) hugs Darlene. Thanks for stopping by! :) Linda
Date: 3/27/2023 9:03:00 AM
Intellectually stimulating poetry, Alice. Sounds like a Texas thunderstorm:) A pleasure to read. Have a wonderful afternoon.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/27/2023 9:23:00 AM
Your comments warm me Daniel. I do like writing about storms, and yes, there is nothing like a Texas thunderstorm. Awesomeness! You have a great afternoon s well my friend. :)
Date: 3/27/2023 8:57:00 AM
This is a masterpiece, Linda! Just exquisite! I had to google Susanoo. That myth sounds interesting. I'm going to read about it. It absolutely inspired lovely poetry.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/27/2023 9:20:00 AM
I am humbled by your words Ann, and delighted that you want to learn more from something I've said. Many thanks for your visits and comments. :)

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