Pat Adams Poet Quatrain

In a Cloud of Smoke

Long ago in a Laundromat
A couple of hippies just met
One asked the other if he smoked weed
He replied, "Every chance I get!"

With the police station next door
Behind the building's where they went
But soon became quite worried 
Alarmed by the smokes ascent!

Frantically swatting at the cloud
They quickly gave up the attack
When they saw they were standing
In front of a vent in the back!

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Michelle Faulkner April 12, 2019 at 12:45 PM I'll bet their laundry was quite fragrant! Pat Adams April 14, 2019 at 3:32 PM It certainly was! I mean, that's what I heard!.....80)

Carolyn Devonshire March 16, 2019 at 6:54 PM Now that's a sure way to get caught smoking weed, Pat! Still, I can see it happening when two people are high. LOL Thanks for the laugh today! Pat Adams March 16, 2019 at 7:44 PM You are certainly welcome Carolyn. Thanks for laughing! In real life I usually just get an eye roll!.........pat

Barbara Gorelick March 16, 2019 at 10:40 AM Made the laundry much more fun! enjoyed. BG Pat Adams March 16, 2019 at 7:42 PM Yes it did! (I mean, I assume).....80)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 15, 2019 at 9:28 PM Somebody's true story, I'm sure of it ;) xomo Pat Adams March 16, 2019 at 2:05 AM I'll admit, it certainly sounds possible!.........80)