In a Castle On a Hill

In a castle on a hill,
Sat a king upon a throne,
Who thought life was dull and still,
Because he was alone-

He summoned castle criers,
To find a bride to be,
They canvassed all his shire,
And found suitable were three-

The first was very pretty,
Marked vanity was her want,
The king felt it a pity-
Only looks she liked to flaunt-

The second yearned for power,
Her heart was full of greed,
Demanding things each hour- 
Of love she had no need-

The third was quite possessive,
Each friend of his she shun,
The king found her obsessive,
And knew she not the one.

In a castle on a hill,
Sat a king upon a throne,
A ruler of free will,
He chose to be alone!

          Moral of the story: Better off alone than with one who doesn't love you!
                         written for Castle On A Hill contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 1, 2016 at 5:54 PM
G Mika, Congratulations on your castle on a hill win... love Linda
Rycroft Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 3:47 AM
Ha Ha very funny x well written good poem x
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 5:03 PM
Beautifully crafted Genevieve! Splendid cadence and deft rhyming throughout. BRAVO! Best wishes, Keith
Kimathi Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 5:57 AM
Wow!!! I love those insightful verses!!! It's worrying though, that these days many people are being forced by "circumstances" to be single..... :-(
May Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 10:29 PM
Great write and win Genevieve...Congrats
Johnson Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Congratulations upon your moral rich story and win. Love, Joyce
Devnath  Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 1:02 PM
Congrats on your win with placement my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Negron Flores Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 12:42 PM
Congratulations Genevieve on the placement of the contest.
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