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In a Castle On A Hill

In a castle on a hill, Sat a king upon a throne, Who thought life was dull and still, Because he was alone- He summoned castle criers, To find a bride to be, They canvassed all his shire, And found suitable were three- The first was very pretty, Marked vanity was her want, The king felt it a pity- Only looks she liked to flaunt- The second yearned for power, Her heart was full of greed, Demanding things each hour- Of love she had no need- The third was quite possessive, Each friend of his she shun, The king found her obsessive, And knew she not the one. In a castle on a hill, Sat a king upon a throne, A ruler of free will, He chose to be alone! Moral of the story: Better off alone than with one who doesn't love you! written for Castle On A Hill contest

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Date: 5/1/2016 5:54:00 PM
G Mika, Congratulations on your castle on a hill win... love Linda
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Date: 5/1/2016 3:47:00 AM
Ha Ha very funny x well written good poem x
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Date: 4/30/2016 5:03:00 PM
Beautifully crafted Genevieve! Splendid cadence and deft rhyming throughout. BRAVO! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/29/2016 5:57:00 AM
Wow!!! I love those insightful verses!!! It's worrying though, that these days many people are being forced by "circumstances" to be single..... :-(
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Date: 4/27/2016 10:29:00 PM
Great write and win Genevieve...Congrats
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Date: 4/27/2016 1:45:00 PM
Congratulations upon your moral rich story and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/27/2016 1:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win with placement my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/27/2016 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations Genevieve on the placement of the contest.
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