In a Box

This box is too short; I’m in a cramp, 
needless to say, it is very damp.
Earthworms are crawling; moving in,
at least it is not a next of kin.
I cannot see without my lamp,
besides, the air is mighty thin.

In this cold drab box I lie,
left without saying goodbye.
I wasn’t in a hurry or rush,
to fill this still breathless hush.
Nor did I have the time to cry,
before hidden by earthy lush...

Copyright © 2008 By Carly S. Muzzey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dietrich Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 1:55 AM
this is my worst nightmare, being buried alive!! Good and creepy!!
Austin Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 12:45 PM
There are other ways of being in a box. I'm sure you have had those in the back of your mind. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Brown Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 8:37 AM
Congratulations so happy to read your well deserved featured poem this week Caryl. Love, Carol
Cheesman Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 9:33 PM
Wow....interesting poem shedding a whole new light on the box none of us ever want to be in - I really like your poem Caryl. Congrats on it being featured this week - Shaz
Fraser Avatar
December 27, 2009 at 9:32 AM
A write that awaits many of us Caryl, nicely written >> James
Kendrick Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 11:47 AM
Nicely done on a topic most don't want to talk about. Keep writing. Sara
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