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IN-HUMAN Veins with same red blood Hearts with hatred and disdain How long will it go? OF- FENCE Nature, His portrait! Fence, a naughty child’s doodle! Needs an eraser. RE-CREATION Magnificent blooms, Bliss of His smart creation, To recreate us. Date: 03-06-2020 Contest: Fresh Traditional Haiku 5-7-5 Judged on: 05/06/2020 Sponsored by: JCB Burl winner: placed 2nd

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Date: 6/7/2020 10:50:00 AM
Complex and interesting--congrats on your win
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/8/2020 8:24:00 AM
Thanks for your appreciation.
Date: 6/7/2020 9:18:00 AM
Deeply woven thoughts ! Congrats.
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/8/2020 8:22:00 AM
your compliments boosted my spirits. Thanks a lot!
Date: 6/6/2020 11:12:00 AM
Your words give a deep message. Congratulations on your win :)
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/8/2020 8:20:00 AM
Thanks for your compliments

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