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the sun was out we were smiling my smile unusually bigger than her's we were sipping lemonade while my mind was slipping towards myself though she hiked though she camped she had never seen snow so wouldn't know because i nevered lied outside of what was to become now it was now that i said dear we must undress completely in order that we can climb in one sleeping bag so that we can feel and feed off each other's body heat i'm coming down with a case of Spring hyperthermia

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Date: 4/16/2019 9:17:00 AM
Warm and cheeky, sweet ink. x
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 4/16/2019 10:26:00 PM
Thats why I use one. Wink wink nod nod. I did get hyperthermia once and WOW it was like a very visual dream. Tell you about it Maureen some day round a Canadian camp fire jajaja.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/16/2019 5:00:00 PM
Heh, turns out zipping two bags together a bad idea, brrr.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 4/16/2019 9:27:00 AM
I'm sure this has happened to you and your husband in those truly harsh Canadian winters jajaja Thanks Maureen.

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