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Impromptu

her hair
hanging
dangling down
to touch
my chest

looking up
i see
a blue sky
cloudless
hopeless

is she 
leaning
over me
breathing
into me

trying to inspire
one last poem
cpr requires
pinching
the noise

musei do not know?

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

February 17, 2019 at 12:03 PM

Hah! Oh a gem! In to the faves it goes.

Jeff Connelly

February 17, 2019 at 10:24 PM

As always Maureen, Thank you so very much. Other people read my poems but no one ever comments but you. I appreciate your comments, but am puzzled by the lack of any interest. I'm not saying my poems are worth a comment, but I've tried serious; joking, and even showing three poems of my old style. You are the only one that ever eaves a comment; so I know by your remarks that you have read them (though I'm not sure about my impromptu that starts with the word "pezones". You responded, "Yummy". I in know way was trying to embarrass you. I always thought they sounded like an Italian dessert). But I still appreciated your comment because I do think that hers ARE yummy. jajaja Thank you so much Maureen.

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