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in the living room was an old rocking chair, that held imprints of a lover no longer there Contest: Du-O Sponsor: Brain Strand 11/15/2020

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Date: 11/20/2020 7:57:00 PM
Alexis, I love the poignant haunting spirit and the tactile emotional imagery of your lost love poem. Simply superb! Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/17/2020 9:33:00 AM
A poignant write. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/17/2020 8:18:00 AM
Alexis, congratulations on your win in Brian's 2 line contest, with this beauty _Constance
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Date: 11/17/2020 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Alexis! Linda
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Date: 11/16/2020 11:20:00 PM
Big congrats on your #1 placement!
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Date: 11/16/2020 6:38:00 PM
Superb-a! Congrats on the win!
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Date: 11/16/2020 5:45:00 PM
aha!!! You chose VERY well, dearie!!! Congrats
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Date: 11/16/2020 5:54:00 PM
I most certainly did. Thanks, I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis
Date: 11/16/2020 1:52:00 PM
Beautiful poem it's my favourite in this contest. I have a rocking chair in my spare room, I often wonder about the people whom have sat there. Congratulations on your win. :-)
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Date: 11/16/2020 1:15:00 PM
I KNEW this would be a big winner!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/16/2020 1:23:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I'm happy I sought your advice. Have wonderful day my friend:-)Alexis
Date: 11/16/2020 11:45:00 AM
But it still creaks! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 11/16/2020 3:51:00 AM
Pure sadness....
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Date: 11/16/2020 1:40:00 AM
I loved this poem. Best for a win. ~~
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Date: 11/15/2020 7:45:00 PM
Alexis, there is a lot of emotional impact in your two short lines. Good imagery. Best wishes in the contest ~ John
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Date: 11/15/2020 5:52:00 PM
Sweet and Sentimental. So nostalgic, Alexis! Good luck in the contest. Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 11/15/2020 4:10:00 PM
Beautifully sad. Memories are filled with tears. Regardless if they’re happy or sad memories. Great short poem, Alexis
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Date: 11/15/2020 3:57:00 PM
I love this kind of short poetry so filled with meaning
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Date: 11/15/2020 2:52:00 PM
So longing and wistful, you created a vivid image with such concise words, which speaks to your talent~
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Date: 11/15/2020 2:34:00 PM
Much said so cleverly, Alexis.
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Date: 11/15/2020 1:45:00 PM
That’s incredibly sad, but beautiful too Alexis... Belle
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Date: 11/15/2020 1:42:00 PM
aww so sad Alexis:-( so few words create a moving image:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/15/2020 1:31:00 PM
Just memories now Alexis. Hope your day going well. Tom
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