Impressionistic Moon

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Under the impressionistic moon of love, obscured by wisps of iridescence shroud, it comes out among the shadows thereof blue eternal skies. Brimming laden stars on a course flickering and whirling loud as it approaches the horizon crown. Autumn's unseen wind joyous resonant delivers an innocent pleasured gasp as thousand butterflies have taken flight. Slowly, leisurely with pure contentment romance whom love will be my taste of wine under a silken coverlet of warmth. 10/28/2017

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Kristina Whitmore

Date: 11/12/2017 2:23:00 PM

To be covered in warmth through true romance it seems a distant story in a tale where the vision of butterflies is where I ought to be. A magical end to autumns affair with winters chill in the air. I love to add on a bit. Have a great day!

Eve Roper
Date: 11/12/2017 2:25:00 PM

Beautiful add on

Brian Davey

Date: 11/2/2017 12:38:00 PM

Starry, starry nights can often be magical, congrats on you win

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/2/2017 12:24:00 PM

Congrats Eve to win on your wonderful poem.Hugs

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 11/2/2017 1:13:00 AM

Congratulations, Eve on your win with a lovely poem.

Lu Loo

Date: 11/1/2017 7:11:00 AM

beautiful and romantic sweet Eve thank you and congrats :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/30/2017 10:14:00 AM

Beautiful and highly poetic ...

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/30/2017 4:53:00 AM

Your poem exceptionally expresses and exquisite light upon the Starry Night write by Van Gogh! And who's thought that his painting was meant for the Autumnal time frame, but you put it in there expertly my friend! What an excellent piece, I loved each and every line of this wondrous poem, Great Work!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/29/2017 9:36:00 AM

Great poem, dear. I loved your choice of words...I also love that painting by Van Gogh. :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/29/2017 9:27:00 AM

You didn't list a poem you wanted us to read so I thought I would read this one. It was well worth the trip to visit you. You are a bright light at poetry soup and I wanted to say that I appreciate your lovely spirit.