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Implications

yesterday,
i saw the most beautiful sunrise
fireball red circle forcing its way
over that fine line
shadowboxed in its own glow
all while the snow fell fast
and heavy
(is everything complicated this lovely)?

what if every-time we touched
we could forget the past
and live normal
(whatever that is?)
would i still blush
like morning's sky
fresh, just getting dressed
and you still shiver
beneath rippled layers 
of this love tight against your own flesh
as if winter was weathering my touch?
(like yesterday's rise)

what if we were like other lovers
without complications of past
lingering into the present
making us long for the future
would our love still be as beautiful 

as this?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/16/2013 5:19:00 PM
Beautifully written very lovely my dear, it reminds me of the old movie love story what if things were different. cheri
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2013 7:52:00 PM
thank you....sometimes life and love can be complicated but beautiful....hugs :)
Date: 11/16/2013 2:46:00 PM
You amaze me Sandra, your words are more beautiful than the sunrise. Simply spectacular. I do have a question, why do you use a small i in your writing??? Soup me, I am curious to learn.
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Date: 11/16/2013 3:44:00 PM
Thank you Richard...your comment made me smile today....hugs :)
Date: 11/16/2013 11:21:00 AM
is complication a trick of the mind, when the simplicity of life is the answer, anyhow your poetry speaks volumes...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2013 3:45:00 PM
perhaps so Harry...and thank you :) hugs
Date: 11/15/2013 4:58:00 PM
Hi Sandra, A thoughtful and lovely write.. Ken
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/15/2013 9:14:00 PM
Thank you so much Ken :)
Date: 11/15/2013 11:34:00 AM
THANKS FOR STOPPING BY MY POEM AND REALLY LIKED YOUR THIS ONE A LOT IT'S TOO SWEET LOVE MAHIMA!!!!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/15/2013 9:14:00 PM
Thank you Mahima...have a great weekend :)
Date: 11/15/2013 11:16:00 AM
- Love goes deeper than at the first touch, it's just the sun as blushes every time. - A beautiful picture in a beautiful poem Sandra. - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/15/2013 9:13:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise...hope your weekend is wonderful as well... hugs :)
Date: 11/15/2013 10:53:00 AM
life is beautiful Sandra. Even bad is good.great poem. (: ) Jenish.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/15/2013 9:13:00 PM
thank you Jenish :)

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