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Imperial Corporate Jurisprudence, The Lurid Leviethan Part One -

I was born unto a woman and a man, and a government, this was the Trinity, these were my employers, entrance into this magical melee was acknowledged with a certificate of birth, and with nefarious numbers, debt digits, from my parents i received sustenance, shelter, and a satisfactory starting point, from my masters I was given models of obedient predessesors, education was enrollment into a systematically subtle indoctrination advocating surrender to the State by believing that we are the State, patriotic bait, a powerful dellusion is pretending to be Free by dominating others, subsequently limiting synergistic enterprise, ergo delivering our wealth to mongers of hate, children offering alligence to ambiguous symbols representing ill defined principles, neophytes showering immolations of precious soul onto alters of commonality, regimented little Beings, trained for the torments of listless labor markets, blind bees searching the plantation for enervating amenities, subdued sensabilities, some will go to war, some to the frenzy of factory, many shall toil in a sundry of slavish services, some will reinforce the dogma, all will perish as coy chattel, this is how the money machine manufactures social stratifications that divide & devour the minions lowered into slow strangulation of economic ditches, the process commences religiously with a receipt documenting your arrival into the Firm, to pay taxes, receive stipends, a contractual stipulate, subservience, upon accepting tax refunds, licenses & other civil benefits we forfiet our sovereignty to centralized government, beauracracies bequeathing the prison mantle, when you realize that countries are companies and the citizens are volitional assets performing as employees, commercial law becomes master of ceremonies, international courts, treaties, constitutions, banks & multinational business conglomerates determine the geopolitics which supercede national agendas, civilization is an organization & an organism orientated towards propigation, preservation, profit & racial proliferation, but these goals are managed by surveilence, infrastructure is priority for the elite, traditions, truth, knowledge, amity, culture, language, art, race, nature are entirely sacraficial, only control and Legion are inviolable, J.A.B. Copyright - 2012 This Composition Is Posted For Skat's "Democrats Vs. Republican " Contest -

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Date: 12/15/2014 11:36:00 PM
Hey Justin. I hope you don't mind but I think it'd be much easier to continue this conversation via Soup Mail - for I can tell this will end up being a very long dialogue, indeed! I'll be sending a Soup Mail right your way :)
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Date: 12/14/2014 1:41:00 AM
Sincerely blown away, Justin. Wow. Not so much a poem (though you used literary devices of much poetic flare) as it is an awakening to reality. A political piece of writing that sees beyond the pale, mostly-meaningless lines such as "republican" and "democrat"... the BIG picture is what I see here. I've wrote a few poems of my own political views... but I don't believe it packed as big of a punch as this one.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 12/15/2014 6:43:00 PM
Ask yourself this question Timothy...do you need a representative...your stimulating intelligence and poetry is always an inspiration for me. Your erudite refetences are valuable as well. Thank you. J.A.B.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 12/15/2014 6:39:00 PM
Continued...2...Partisan politics is a social engineering ruse indeed. I've always been enthralled by the translation from Greek to English that Government is defined as control of the mind...and should include wealth as well. Every current form of government in the industrialized world is owned, in entirety, and regulated by a ruling financial "elite", rather parasitic. J.A.B.
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Date: 12/15/2014 6:33:00 PM
Continued...this technical and moral focus of this poem is on international Maritime Commercial Law which has become an instrument of lurid debt slavery for the world's population. The disillusionment spawned by the fact that everyone born into the "civilized" world becomes chattel via the legal process of commerce is truly staggering. You don't own your body my friend, that's a wild truth! J.A.B.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 12/15/2014 6:26:00 PM
Your perspective on the nature and use of "Money" deserves moral merit Timothy. I agree, that money is a medium of exchange, a facilitator of barter and commerce, whether it be fiat currency or money in true substance such as precious metals or other tangible commodities. Usury has become the real anathema of prosperity on the micro level, I.e. household income and self reliance...J.A.B.
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Date: 12/14/2014 1:47:00 AM
I don't believe that MONEY itself is evil - though it is the person that corrupts it. It's a representation of a person's value - so if his value is flawed so will his money be as well. Some interesting reads would be Ayn Rand's money speech as well as the writings of John Locke. Apologize for my inflated comment, but I find it all quite fascinating...
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 12/14/2014 1:46:00 AM
Your poem tackles so many topics of discussion that several books of commentary could be published, on analyzing this poem alone! Most political opinion isn't based on principle, but flimsy fragments of some politician's "rough idea" - due to change at a moment's notice.
Date: 2/3/2013 7:24:00 PM
that is some write there,,, are we referring to the social security # and other such entities of underhanded two faced beings ;} congrats on win .
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/4/2013 12:40:00 PM
Thank You Debbie - Yes, you are on the correct trail of legal enslavement, people unwittingly pledged as surety for corporate debt - ' strawman accounts ' - J.A.B. %
Date: 1/5/2013 4:56:00 PM
Wow...nice win...totally correct in my opinion. Mind obliterating.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/7/2013 1:43:00 PM
The subject matter of this composition is a challenge to confront and to compare to traditional belief systems Jay - so glad you got obliterated by it - sometimes we need to be 'reduced' in order to build up to truth - you are warrior wise - J.A.B. %
Date: 12/7/2012 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "Reps vs Dems" contest Justin. Love Carol
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Date: 12/5/2012 12:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win Justin xx
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Date: 12/4/2012 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 12/4/2012 2:48:00 AM
Congratulations friend Justin on your grand win...its fisrt place indeed!!! cheers!!!!!!!!
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Date: 12/3/2012 5:53:00 PM
I knew this was a winner the first time I read this... hope you are well.. miss seeing you around here... :-) CONGRATULATIONS ON A POEM WELL DONE..... ALWAYS & FOREVER~ linda
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Date: 12/3/2012 5:47:00 PM
Great Poem and congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/3/2012 5:26:00 PM
the best entry.. love it so much.THANKS~SKAT
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Date: 11/3/2012 4:56:00 PM
I got a taste; first course and now dessert coming up; gotta go!
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Justin Bordner
Date: 11/4/2012 1:28:00 PM
Thanks for the attention Lizzie - J.A.B. %
Date: 11/2/2012 5:19:00 AM
brilliant work, Justin and you are so right, the manipulation of our lives is a disgrace.. But, who could make it better, i've seen wonderful honesty and decent people, become tarnish, once under the influence of power and wealth....
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Justin Bordner
Date: 11/4/2012 1:27:00 PM
When we collectively become poor enough, hungry enough, and sufficiently wise then uninstitutionalized democracy will have an opportunity to prevail over oppressive legal systems Harry - I am grateful for your praise - J.A.B. %
Date: 10/31/2012 6:47:00 PM
Read both parts of the piece, Justin, and I gottah say--WOW. Lots of wisdom in your words and the last line really wraps it all up... Social control, is not freedom. I absolutely agree with the whole of the poem. Very well written. I appreciate all of the time you must have put into it, and well presenting this powerful protestation (our rightful freedom of speech) to the public. Keep it up! You never fail to awe me. Always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 11/1/2012 9:44:00 PM
I thank you for your loyalty Laura - I am proud to be a colleague of yours - I am happy that you recognize the meaning and import of the subject in this composition - we need no man or parchment to remind us that we have the natural right to express ourselves, or to keep in entirety the wages of our labor - we are in the business of aweing my friend - J.A.B. %
Date: 10/26/2012 8:39:00 PM
Justin, wow...every time I think you hit a powerful poem,,i click on another one, ,, and bam .. you hit me with a poem so straightforward... I feel sorry for anyone trying to debate with your brilliant ways. You are a wise poet. the government will never find the right peace... good luck in the contest... love PD
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/27/2012 11:19:00 PM
there is something fundamentally wrong with that considering most of our ' Leaders ' are duplicitous with ulterior motives - ironically, I have entered Skat's contest as an act of protest regarding the theme - I intend no insult towards Skat, I think an important forum has been established for us through the contest - J.A.B. %
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/27/2012 11:14:00 PM
I need your love and I humbly thank you for it PD. - the government exercises it'spower through force; if we are going to achieve any meaningful cultural and financial prosperity again this truism must be admitted into the discussion - a small number of people are telling everyone else what to do with their wages and lives;