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Inspired by Constance La France 

Written on 7/5/2023

Imperfect she isn't, in her white lace dress, Her short curly blond hair in such a mess. Benevolence, four-years-old, three feet tall, Such a precocious pearl, her finger so small. She walks in with elegant garden flowers Among the glimmering smile she towers. Warm light rays awkwardly squeeze through the door As she makes her first step onto the floor. She imagines delight in her mom's eyes, Caressing the garden flowers with surprise

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Date: 7/21/2023 10:19:00 AM
Eve, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge I Words !
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Date: 7/7/2023 5:08:00 PM
Eve, I love everything about this painting and the moments you've created. This is beautiful in every way. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 7/7/2023 4:03:00 AM
Oh, I so love this; congratulations.
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Date: 7/7/2023 3:38:00 AM
so lovely, her perfect loveliness is well complimented by this gorgeous write. Congratulations Eve.
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Date: 7/7/2023 1:16:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Eve :) - hugs
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Date: 7/6/2023 8:55:00 PM
I just love all the line Eve! A little girl, so filled with loveliness and grace. Trying to please her Mother. Panagiota
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Date: 7/6/2023 7:44:00 PM
Back with heartfelt congratulations on your top contest win, dear Eve.
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Date: 7/6/2023 1:16:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, dear Eve!
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Date: 7/6/2023 12:24:00 PM
Eve, your poem and description are truly beautiful. You have done an outstanding job.
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Date: 7/6/2023 9:44:00 AM
- I picked flowers for my mother all spring and summer ... a lovely poem, Eve :) - hugs
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Date: 7/6/2023 4:13:00 AM
Lovely poem, Eve. Just as the picture portrays :) BOL in the contest. Hugs
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Date: 7/5/2023 10:40:00 PM
A lovely poem and description. Well done.
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Date: 7/5/2023 10:29:00 PM
I thought this was some bride but I saw the picture. Imperfect? Could be, dear Eve. Yet she was simply delicious. Best for a win. Hugs xx
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