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Impatient Lover

There was a young fellow named Mark Who liked to make out in the park. It was late afternoon When he wanted to spoon. His girl make him wait until dark.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/31/2014 11:13:00 PM
Joyce This is cute and funny. The humor made me chuckle and smile. Thank you for the awesome comment on my Why God poem
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Date: 12/13/2011 1:47:00 PM
Fantastic Limerick Joyce, the best I've read for quite a while. Many congratulations on your most deserved win :)
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Date: 12/10/2011 9:14:00 AM
Cute one..enjoyed reading it very much..Sara..Soup Mail soon..
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Date: 12/9/2011 8:33:00 PM
hahaha. It's better in the dark. Silly guy!
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