Impatient Lover

There was a young fellow named Mark
Who liked to make out in the park.
It was late afternoon
When he wanted to spoon.
His girl make him wait until dark.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Davis Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 11:13 PM
Joyce This is cute and funny. The humor made me chuckle and smile. Thank you for the awesome comment on my Why God poem
Fraser Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 1:47 PM
Fantastic Limerick Joyce, the best I've read for quite a while. Many congratulations on your most deserved win :)
Kendrick Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 9:14 AM
Cute one..enjoyed reading it very much..Sara..Soup Mail soon..
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 8:33 PM
hahaha. It's better in the dark. Silly guy!
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