Carrie Richards Poet Free verse

Impatience

I know somewhere, away from here
Somewhere deep on different shores
Our stars are meant to cross again
I know of love............I know

I feel your presence here with me
It matters not the century
A tangled vine was sent for me
To cling, until my eyes can see
you reaching out for me 

There is a tangled vine, that grows between
Two centuries old, it can't be seen
Between us now, it has a hold
that defies all lucid reasoning



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Submitted for Dr. Ram's Contest "Passion Pays, Not Patience"

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Honestly J.T. September 23, 2013 at 2:48 AM A true poem of passion. Congratulations on your HM

Seren Roberts September 23, 2013 at 1:00 AM Congratulations ....Seren

Richard Lamoureux September 22, 2013 at 9:43 PM So passionate! Congratulations.

Poet Destroyer A September 22, 2013 at 8:43 PM nice poem of passion...Linda

Sara Kendrick September 22, 2013 at 6:41 PM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

Joe Maverick September 22, 2013 at 1:40 PM Congratulations Carrie on the H M..'

Sandra Adams September 21, 2013 at 9:02 AM another fin write from your gifted pen...congrats on your win :)

Shadow Hamilton September 21, 2013 at 8:05 AM Carrie enjoyed reading congrats on honorable mention Shadow x smile

Dr.Ram Mehta September 21, 2013 at 7:24 AM Congrats on the win in my contest, Carrie. The entry was for any form except the free verse. Carrie Richards September 21, 2013 at 9:15 AM oops.......my oversight! Thank you for the HM, however! :) Carrie

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2013 at 2:59 PM this reminds me of those shows about people who time travel back to their loved one. Romantic one for his contest. ME LIKES.

Dr.Ram Mehta September 7, 2013 at 7:23 PM Thanks for the entry

Connie Marcum Wong September 7, 2013 at 6:42 PM This is a wonderfully written entry for the contest Carrie. I am sure to see it in the winner's circle. It is so good to be back here reading poetry again. I have missed so many outstanding poems. I had an operation on my eyes and had to keep away from the computer until they healed.

Sara Kendrick September 7, 2013 at 2:49 PM Creative contest entry...Reads like winners list to me..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Eileen Manassian September 7, 2013 at 11:53 AM Lovely, Carrie...You are a true poetess with finesse! :) Good luck on contest, my dear...LOVE your avatar..Always that beautiful smile....