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Impatience

I know somewhere, away from here Somewhere deep on different shores Our stars are meant to cross again I know of love............I know I feel your presence here with me It matters not the century A tangled vine was sent for me To cling, until my eyes can see you reaching out for me There is a tangled vine, that grows between Two centuries old, it can't be seen Between us now, it has a hold that defies all lucid reasoning
___________________________________________________ Submitted for Dr. Ram's Contest "Passion Pays, Not Patience"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/23/2013 2:48:00 AM
A true poem of passion. Congratulations on your HM
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Date: 9/23/2013 1:00:00 AM
Congratulations ....Seren
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Date: 9/22/2013 9:43:00 PM
So passionate! Congratulations.
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Date: 9/22/2013 8:43:00 PM
nice poem of passion...Linda
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Date: 9/22/2013 6:41:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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Date: 9/22/2013 1:40:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on the H M..'
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Date: 9/21/2013 9:02:00 AM
another fin write from your gifted pen...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/21/2013 8:05:00 AM
Carrie enjoyed reading congrats on honorable mention Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/21/2013 7:24:00 AM
Congrats on the win in my contest, Carrie. The entry was for any form except the free verse.
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Date: 9/21/2013 9:15:00 AM
oops.......my oversight! Thank you for the HM, however! :) Carrie
Date: 9/8/2013 2:59:00 PM
this reminds me of those shows about people who time travel back to their loved one. Romantic one for his contest. ME LIKES.
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Date: 9/7/2013 7:23:00 PM
Thanks for the entry
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Date: 9/7/2013 6:42:00 PM
This is a wonderfully written entry for the contest Carrie. I am sure to see it in the winner's circle. It is so good to be back here reading poetry again. I have missed so many outstanding poems. I had an operation on my eyes and had to keep away from the computer until they healed.
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Date: 9/7/2013 2:49:00 PM
Creative contest entry...Reads like winners list to me..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 9/7/2013 11:53:00 AM
Lovely, Carrie...You are a true poetess with finesse! :) Good luck on contest, my dear...LOVE your avatar..Always that beautiful smile....
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