Immortality Viii

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" LOVE " MY PHOTO, ©

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If immortal, Among men you wish to be, my friend; Seek glory But If immortality, Next to our Lord, you yearn to enjoy; Love! © Demetrios Trifiatis 25 September 2021

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Harry Horsman

Date: 9/27/2021 2:37:00 AM

Love the wisdom. and the poetry.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/28/2021 4:35:00 AM

A pleasure to receive your gracious comment, dear harry! Blessings!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/25/2021 5:31:00 AM

Sound advice Demetrios, love is the key to everything. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/28/2021 4:33:00 AM

So kind of you, dearest Tom! Blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/25/2021 5:08:00 AM

Great advice my friend. Lovely flower bouquet.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/28/2021 4:33:00 AM

Thank you my dearest friend, Vijay!

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/25/2021 2:10:00 AM

WoW! Demetrios, Excellent advice in your wise words. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend:-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/25/2021 4:00:00 AM

Thank you for your gracious comment my dearest, Alexis. Have a glorious weekend. Hugs xxx

Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/25/2021 12:15:00 AM

Demetrios, I would be king if love were the only price I ever had to pay. Let me be mortal's best to die in love's arms, if only for a day. -Richard

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/25/2021 1:31:00 AM

My friend, Richard, you know better than anyone that God is love and those who love are in God and God is in them. If one loves his fellow man he will do everything he can to help and will never cause harm to anyone. It is that simple. Love and immortality is yours. Blessings