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Immortality; the Unopened Gift! (Part 1)

Jesus was love’s adorned forlornness package, exact and packed
But heaven’s fallopian in some, still remains unopened
For most a door of the hoping, rather than an opening
Formerly sealed by mind’s zeal, a veil, over love’s sacred face
Though to cover God’s face, is such a carnal sin of waste

Some receive this present with glee, never to open you see,
Saying I’ll open someday, when I finish my play
To receive the present is good, but to be the present they could,
If open, the present they would, and most certainly they should
For most certainly Christ’s blood, has covered sin with flood

You would certainly open a present of the material of strife
Why not open, heaven’s fallopian, this present, is life
To have the present, you must receive, but open please
So far, so good, if you would, for there is no reprieve,
To have love’s life you could, if only you would, perceive

So let us face, the sacred face, that bought us sacred grace,
And open the interior, to expose our inner mirror
The trouble we have, we don’t open our precious heart valve,
For the love that we have, there will always be striving trouble,
If we live in the double of the mind’s carnal bubble

To begin living , a present, you’ve been graciously given,
Break out, of mind’s prison, into immortality’s living
Therefore believing from your heart, is your most very good start
Your mind has painted you into a box, it is a worldly hoax,
Like the very small fox, know the kind?  Jesus said, “nips your vine”

In ploy for control, the mind is so very bold, against soul
Though there is no scold, from heart’s fold, of God’s gold
The present remains unopened fallopian, a closed mold
For the old man of the mind against grace, took a stand
To find the new man, open your present and make a new stand

Continued

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/2/2010 5:00:00 PM
inner mirror. i enjoyed your narrative, and use of words along with it today.no matter what, God remains the same, and one day anyone would want him to be there, although i don't think they realize that he is always there, observing you, whether you believe him or not. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 2/25/2010 2:03:00 PM
Moses, Reading your poetry this evening has been a wonderful way to relax and enjoy myself. Yes, even after all that judging... Thank you for writing this poem. It is as usual, a blessing to read. (And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well.) Have a super Day! I'm off to part 2! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/10/2010 1:06:00 PM
Luke 18:27 And he said, the things which are impossible with men are possible with God. Nice to connect with another spiritual person Moses. I like your name too. One of my grandson is Matthew. Ellen
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Date: 2/2/2010 1:35:00 PM
Yes I fear our Bibles ae dusty and our TVs working overtime. Lots of thoughts to ponder here, John. Thank you for reading my postings. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/1/2010 3:17:00 PM
Wonderful expression of your faith, John ... I'm off to read part II ... smile
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Date: 1/30/2010 5:31:00 PM
enjoyed reading today
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Date: 1/30/2010 4:08:00 PM
Your second verse has resonated with me deeply... how truly gifted u are Moses and how magnificently u relay the message of hope and luv to all who read... looking forward to the continuation..... how can I say thankxxx for all your loving support and kindness and your special comments to uplift and inspire me to press on.. amazing friend... u are a treasure from God to me.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/30/2010 11:12:00 AM
A pity to have a great gift but fail to open it. Great write in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for the many comments that you have taken your time to post on my poems. Sara
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Date: 1/30/2010 9:12:00 AM
A write full of wisdom, JohnMoses, as usual. We pray everyday for those who have been given this gift and can not see it, and for those of us who lay it aside. Awesome! God bless you. Peace, audrey
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Date: 1/29/2010 10:25:00 PM
The significance of life and living with faith is conveyed magnificently, Moses. We have to believe from our hearts to follow God's plan. Very uplifting with a bright perspective for the future. Much needed in these troubling times. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 1/29/2010 1:44:00 PM
yes lets open the present, enjoyed reading ,lets go to the next one..
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