Immortality Is Fanciful

Like antique china that slips through clumsy fingertips 
Shattered into tiny fragments
Unrepairable, unreplaceable
A blameless mistake 
It's beauty disintegrates 
Never to be appreciated again
By future enthusiasts

Like a daisy tweaked from the vast landscape
Once admired by all that stumbled upon it
Basking in the summer sun
Life dragged from its roots
Crippled at its fragile stem
It will never grow again
Petals float onto a zephyr
Carried away to where distant memories lie

Like A man surrounded by family, promises, 
All snatched spontaneously away.
that love that encapsulates him
At first a void remains, as his memory lives on
Until it becomes so vague 
It inevitably expires
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Beckman  Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 6:29 PM
You've done a really good job writing this. I like the line "Petals float onto a zephyr carried away to where distant memories lie" it creates a sense of loss.
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