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Immortality

Immortality                     
           Requiem
       Eternal existence
       Forfeit my crown
     Perpetuate my flesh
     Slaughter my soul 
         Putrid flesh
         Sacred soul 
                            
                            
         Eternal essence                                      
        Depressing fantasy 
        Wretched existence
    Missing dearly departed
         Seeking solace


          Eternal quest
       Essence unrelenting
         No epilogue

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Date: 9/30/2020 7:26:00 AM
Thank you, Of all my poems this one is my favorite. I am glad you appreciate my work. Peace,love, understanding David
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Date: 9/29/2020 9:31:00 PM
I believe in eternal existence. This is one of the best writes I've read. I love the imagery it portrays. Peace, Angie
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Date: 9/15/2020 4:42:00 AM
Very deep and profound, David. Much to ponder here. ~ Elaine
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David Grimm
Date: 9/15/2020 10:28:00 AM
Thank you for your encouragement. Your comments are much appreciated. David

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