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Immortality

Immortality Requiem Eternal existence Forfeit my crown Perpetuate my flesh Slaughter my soul Putrid flesh Sacred soul Eternal essence Depressing fantasy Wretched existence Missing dearly departed Seeking solace Eternal quest Essence unrelenting No epilogue

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Date: 9/30/2020 7:26:00 AM
Thank you, Of all my poems this one is my favorite. I am glad you appreciate my work. Peace,love, understanding David
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Date: 9/29/2020 9:31:00 PM
I believe in eternal existence. This is one of the best writes I've read. I love the imagery it portrays. Peace, Angie
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Date: 9/15/2020 4:42:00 AM
Very deep and profound, David. Much to ponder here. ~ Elaine
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David Grimm
Date: 9/15/2020 10:28:00 AM
Thank you for your encouragement. Your comments are much appreciated. David

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