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Immortal Poetic Lyrics

Pondering prophetic legacies of timeless lovers, my heart yearned for a province lavished with perennial passion. Searching for an enchanted perfect petal, I wandered within the flower garden of infatuation. Marigolds shone, smiling among mellow yellow roses, but their fair friendly fragrance could not quench my thirst. In the distance, a silhouette of the rarest red rose beamed, her dulcet aromatic ambience summoned my soul closer. Upon the first sight of my beloved's subtle innocent eyes, my mind drifted to a place where time did not exist. Without a word, her radiance illuminated my whole existence, like a butterfly admiring pulchritudinous petals - it was pure paradise. Hand in hand we strolled embarking upon the realms of infinite love, composing our own idyllic legacy of immortal poetic lyrics. Simple Musings Silent One 3 July 2018

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Date: 2/11/2019 7:41:00 AM
HI Silent, such an exceptionally beautiful piece has flowed from your golden pen, onto the page. Another free verse poetic gem that sings in its Heavenly grace. Poetry at its best my friend. I was enthralled by the words and the images they created. Your artistry shines my friend. A fave. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always Mike.
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Date: 9/3/2018 6:18:00 PM
Hello Silent One, I know this is Free Verse. Yet i read it as a romantic poem. I like roses. Red, yellow, pink. I also like the lavenders. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 8/10/2018 1:29:00 PM
This is so beautiful it brings tears to my eyes (almost...lol). Honestly, just dreamy. It transports one to that perfect world of love and joy we all seek...but do not all find. FAVED of course!
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Date: 7/27/2018 10:37:00 AM
You have mastered the romantic write, I loved every word except pulchritudinous sometimes unusual words take away rather than add to the splendour of the romance. Just my humble opinion!
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Date: 7/21/2018 7:52:00 PM
Musings that beguile Silent! Stunnng imagery in this romantic piece my friend! : )
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Date: 7/19/2018 4:43:00 PM
Wondrous romantic poetry that radiates the infinite blessings of true love and its miracles.. A fav...
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Date: 7/15/2018 3:36:00 PM
Hardly a "simple musing" S1. A love story at its core dear one.
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Date: 7/10/2018 1:32:00 PM
Your this poem has certainly touch my heart,there is nothing left to say, everything about this poem was perfect, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 7/9/2018 3:48:00 PM
Beautifully tuned into the miraculous wonders around, you write like a dream, so elegant and appreciative of language.
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Date: 7/8/2018 7:48:00 AM
Excellent love poetry. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/6/2018 4:03:00 PM
Silent One, I am swept up and away by the depth, breadth and beauty of your exquisite portrayal of finding and embracing soulmate love. Every line is so stunningly poetic. Warmest wishes my wonderful friend. ~Susan
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Date: 7/6/2018 3:45:00 PM
How Beautiful...Extremely Beautiful.I'm touched S.One.
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Date: 7/5/2018 3:08:00 PM
a very lovely musing of love as a red red rose!
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Date: 7/5/2018 2:59:00 PM
flowers and love go together, S... i enjoyed this wonderful piece and the use of alliteration heightened such richness of ardor... huggs
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Date: 7/5/2018 11:41:00 AM
I want that map, to the place where time does not exist. Wonderful piece SO, congratulations for such an enjoyable read...
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Date: 7/4/2018 11:13:00 PM
This is awesome, Silent One...you have penned another classic my friend...superb!
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Date: 7/4/2018 6:24:00 PM
hard to capture the fleeting moments with poetic expressions of its feeling...you have done so poet...well done
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Date: 7/4/2018 10:21:00 AM
You left me with nothing to say Silent One, you have said it all here. Beautiful piece
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Date: 7/4/2018 6:09:00 AM
Really beautiful! The immortal petals of poets. From the dust of petals roses are reborn fresh...though their laurels will always have thorns.
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Date: 7/4/2018 12:26:00 AM
pulchritudinous . I learned a new word today. Your poetry opens a world door . One that has much to offer the reader. Thanks for sharing your beauty and talent.
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Date: 7/3/2018 11:46:00 PM
You picked the perfect song with this poem S1. Your poem has captured, become the essence of which you write. I am glad I found this today.
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Date: 7/3/2018 11:45:00 PM
Beautiful word tapestry woven w/the elegance of a poet true, SO. Great lines thru out ... Searching for an enchanted perfect petal, I wandered within the flower garden of infatuation. Pulchritudinous, eh. Seriously? I had to go look that one up. You're the best, as is this poem. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 7/3/2018 8:01:00 PM
This poem seems it should be read with such a soft voice. So ethereal and one almost feels a sense of evening breeze in your garden of poetry :)
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Date: 7/3/2018 7:36:00 PM
A rose in bloom, shedding its beauty and sweet aroma. There is romance, love and magical moments around your thoughts. Simply breathtaking indeed. ~ Brandy
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Date: 7/3/2018 7:25:00 PM
Beautiful poem with fantastic imagery .. your poetry always shines .. Hugs Eve
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