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If you had the option to be an immortal, would you leap at the chance, or just let that go? It sounds like a question that’s easy to answer, but I’d recommend that you take it real slow. Are you the only one who lasts forever, outliving all of your family and friends? Do you think you would be able to stomach the funerals of grandchildren meeting their ends? And what of your health? Are you just like you are now, receiving a body that’s twenty years old? The former, depressing, if movement is limited; the latter is one on which I’m not quite sold. Who did you hang with when you were just twenty, and are these the folks with whom you’d spend your time? Nightclubs and dancing for the rest of the ages sounds more like hell than a slice of the divine. I think I’ll pass and just live the remainder of the days God has allotted for me; then when I’ve been ushered into His presence, I’ll sing out His praises for eternity. ————— For the If I Were Immortal Poetry Contest Sponsored by Anoucheka Gangabissoon Written on 04/18/2022

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Date: 4/22/2022 5:55:00 AM
Love this piece as it pictures your personal Christian world view (which I share) clearly with distinction. Well-written, a winner in my book.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 4/22/2022 6:09:00 AM
Thanks very much! I think of Psalm 16:6 - the boundary lines for me have fallen in pleasant places; I have a beautiful inheritance
Date: 4/18/2022 8:56:00 PM
Marvelous. I hope you read my submission, Jeff, for I point out that for the believer, we are promised eternal life, which is given to us when we receive Christ. So, in fact, we have everlasting life right now. It's not a fantasy; it's a reality.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 4/22/2022 6:07:00 AM
Ha! My daughter, son-in-law, and one granddaughter live there, so we went to visit. It is an austere beauty out there, but I prefer my green hills...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/19/2022 1:51:00 PM
What in the world is a nice boy like you doing in Utah????
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 4/18/2022 9:14:00 PM
Oh yeah, right there with you! I’ve been in Utah all week and about all I can do to check in. Writing poetry in an iPad is for the birds! Hope to get back to a bit more reading next week
Date: 4/18/2022 6:45:00 PM
Sounds downright immoral...
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