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Immanent Yet Transcendent Poetry Contest

motherhood transcends with love that is immanent I give of myself how much I love you though I have not yet met you I pledge all to you everything I am I pray I can still be more Lord I seek guidance all that I consume everything my body stored is gifted to child I will endure pain and instantly forget it with you in my arms lifetime protection nourishment from my body happy and healthy you bring so much joy nothing can ever compare motherhood transcends

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Susan Manley

Date: 10/8/2023 9:52:00 PM

Love this

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/8/2023 10:38:00 PM

Thanks Susan - I'd tried writing for this contest multiple times and couldn't get the content to work for any form I tried and settled on this in the end. I was pleased it met with the sponsors approval. Thanks for your kind words

Jay Narain

Date: 10/4/2023 1:12:00 PM

Noce one

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/4/2023 1:31:00 PM

Thanks Jay

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/4/2023 10:16:00 AM

this is such a lovely chain of linked senryu..cherish every moment

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/4/2023 10:19:00 AM

Thanks Charlotte - they've just trampled all over me along with the dog when I snuck off to lie down but they are still beautiful! :D