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Imagine If

(I)n every person there was a desire to perform random acts of kindness (M)eaningless and senseless bigotry was done away with (A)nd love for our fellow man became the norm (G)estures great and small made the front page every day (I)n our time we could abolish war (N)o longer did hunger and famine fill our land (E)very one helped each other to succeed (I)magine if (F)or one brief moment all of this could be experienced what a magnificent and beautiful world we would have

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/9/2017 7:18:00 PM

Edward hello,you did a great job on this poem. Yes you could win a contest with this poem. You never know Edward it could come true. one day. I look forward to reading your poetry.

Edward Mccall
Date: 3/11/2017 10:38:00 AM

Thank you so much Darlene for your kind words and your encouragement it really means a lot to me. I apologize for taking so long to respond busy last couple days thank you again so much.though I may not always comment I love reading your poetry have a blessed day.

Funom Makama

Date: 3/5/2017 9:22:00 AM

You have pointed out the message so clear, poetic, original and with a fantastic imagery expression. Thank you for this lovely share friend. This is definitely a star content.

Edward Mccall
Date: 3/5/2017 4:53:00 PM

Thank you so much Funom for your kind and encouraging words. I keep hoping that it will come true one day. Thank you again kind sir and I look forward to reading your poetry have a blessed day my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/3/2017 1:41:00 PM

What a great Acrostic Edward. Very well done. A fav. :) :)

Edward Mccall
Date: 3/3/2017 10:42:00 PM

Thank you so much Heidi and thank you for the doubles miles and the fav.