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contest Imagine, Interlude, Ivory

sponsor Constance La France

Imagine

The long day welcomes an evening's pause
of red-feathered skies
as the last dim light of Autumn has arrived
tonight I will lie on a hillside
   and imagine you
though we are miles apart we'll dance in the moonlight
beneath stars that wander above, like fine-dressed guests
and you...before me in a blue and white cotton dress
that catches the chilled air as you spin...smiling
I'll bow before you and raise my head to find your eyes
then lift you high, a silhouette against the moon
   Yes, I will imagine you
in streams of flowing pictures that flood my mind
before pouring over me
a waterfall trying to wash away the years
of purple asters and roses whose beauty filled the senses
   in cluttered thoughts of distant days
that come like a flock of birds diving in unison
dispersing as they fall as brown fallen leaves
that lie scattered and crumbled, tumbling away
with the curled petals of asters and roses
   that cover an empty garden
where ghostly footprints vanish into a gray horizon
   of flowing black clouds
where the sun never rises, and the round sky cries
   leaving nothing
I will imagine what beauty was, before the storm
and I was left to walk on barren ground
that lies before the jeweled steps
leading to the throne of love
where my heart and soul once sat
   next to you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hamilton Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 11:24 AM
This is an amazing write Frederick a sure winner and a fave for me!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 4:11 AM
A lovely write, Frederick! … a waterfall trying to wash away the years of purple asters and roses whose beauty filled the senses…Congratulations!
La France Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 10:48 AM
Frederic, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, well done, Constance
Andresen Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 7:17 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Frederic :) - hugs
Bowring Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 1:59 PM
Just beautiful Frederic. You are such a stunning poet that takes my breath away when reading your work. Another astounding piece from you. You convey emotions so vividly, exquisitely, poetically. So romantic and dreamy. Quite hauntingly beautiful. Love it. I find you so inspiring Frederic. Thank you. Blessings to you :)
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 11:28 AM
- You send beautiful thoughts for miles, Frederic ... I can see the "red-feathered sky" :) - ( and ... ghostly footprints :))) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 3:56 AM
This is absolutely stunning frederick! I just love this! How you’ve used the word imagine here is so romantic and passionate and so very touching , and your poem flows with magical imagery and moving lines! That left me captivated and in awe! I especially love the line “ though we are miles apart we'll dance in the moonlightl hits home for me! How gorgeous! And the line with “ fine dressed” is so good too! This is one of my faves from you definitely! I love everything abt this
Leiser Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 6:06 PM
Rapturous, romantic write and immensely epic! I was lost in your world as you so eloquently described the scenes, the mood the longing…amazing! A definite Fave and know this poem is top tier, Frederic! :)
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 2:59 PM
you imagery and use of colour is simply perfect Frederic, though the ending is deep and dark it was a joy to read this dull dark autumnal evening:-) hugs jan xx
Meadows Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 2:13 PM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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