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contest Imagine, Interlude, Ivory

sponsor Constance La France

The long day welcomes an evening's pause of red-feathered skies as the last dim light of Autumn has arrived tonight I will lie on a hillside and imagine you though we are miles apart we'll dance in the moonlight beneath stars that wander above, like fine-dressed guests and you...before me in a blue and white cotton dress that catches the chilled air as you spin...smiling I'll bow before you and raise my head to find your eyes then lift you high, a silhouette against the moon Yes, I will imagine you in streams of flowing pictures that flood my mind before pouring over me a waterfall trying to wash away the years of purple asters and roses whose beauty filled the senses in cluttered thoughts of distant days that come like a flock of birds diving in unison dispersing as they fall as brown fallen leaves that lie scattered and crumbled, tumbling away with the curled petals of asters and roses that cover an empty garden where ghostly footprints vanish into a gray horizon of flowing black clouds where the sun never rises, and the round sky cries leaving nothing I will imagine what beauty was, before the storm and I was left to walk on barren ground that lies before the jeweled steps leading to the throne of love where my heart and soul once sat next to you

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Date: 10/23/2023 11:24:00 AM
This is an amazing write Frederick a sure winner and a fave for me!
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Date: 10/19/2023 4:11:00 AM
A lovely write, Frederick! … a waterfall trying to wash away the years of purple asters and roses whose beauty filled the senses…Congratulations!
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Date: 10/18/2023 10:48:00 AM
Frederic, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, well done, Constance
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Date: 10/18/2023 7:17:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Frederic :) - hugs
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Date: 10/14/2023 1:59:00 PM
Just beautiful Frederic. You are such a stunning poet that takes my breath away when reading your work. Another astounding piece from you. You convey emotions so vividly, exquisitely, poetically. So romantic and dreamy. Quite hauntingly beautiful. Love it. I find you so inspiring Frederic. Thank you. Blessings to you :)
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Date: 10/12/2023 11:28:00 AM
- You send beautiful thoughts for miles, Frederic ... I can see the "red-feathered sky" :) - ( and ... ghostly footprints :))) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 10/12/2023 3:56:00 AM
This is absolutely stunning frederick! I just love this! How you’ve used the word imagine here is so romantic and passionate and so very touching , and your poem flows with magical imagery and moving lines! That left me captivated and in awe! I especially love the line “ though we are miles apart we'll dance in the moonlightl hits home for me! How gorgeous! And the line with “ fine dressed” is so good too! This is one of my faves from you definitely! I love everything abt this
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Date: 10/11/2023 6:06:00 PM
Rapturous, romantic write and immensely epic! I was lost in your world as you so eloquently described the scenes, the mood the longing…amazing! A definite Fave and know this poem is top tier, Frederic! :)
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Date: 10/11/2023 2:59:00 PM
you imagery and use of colour is simply perfect Frederic, though the ending is deep and dark it was a joy to read this dull dark autumnal evening:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/11/2023 2:13:00 PM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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