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I can be transported into a world where the impossible is real! Ice cream clouds in shades of indigo and pink drop iced chocolate rain. My imagination rocks! Pleiades I contest Sponsored by Kim Merryman *real counted as one syllable as soup counter shows one and how many syllables shows 2! Counted as 1 syllable for the contest Poem checked with how many syllables 02~25~17

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Mark Martin

Date: 3/4/2017 2:35:00 PM

Like the line to line flow - and made me hungry! Congratulations Jan! :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2017 2:41:00 PM

Thanks Mark:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/3/2017 1:56:00 PM

I like your imagination, Jan! So much enthusiasm in this! Congrats! Blessings, Kim

Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2017 3:00:00 PM

Thanks Kim I do so love this form and let my imagination fly:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/2/2017 3:43:00 AM

What a splendid imagination ... congratulations on your win, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 3/2/2017 2:22:00 PM

Thanks Probir:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/1/2017 8:17:00 PM

A 7 for this appealing, winning piece, Jan! Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 3/2/2017 2:22:00 PM

Thanks Janice I was pleased to be on the winners list:-) hugs jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/1/2017 7:24:00 PM

Delicious imagination, Jan. Congrats on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2017 7:29:00 PM

Thanks Agnes:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/1/2017 3:46:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2017 5:14:00 PM

We both got the same position too Laura! :-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2017 3:32:00 PM

Yes, one of the best for imagination!! Congrats on the win, Jan. Soupmail

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2017 5:15:00 PM

Thanks Andrea - replied:-( hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett

Date: 3/1/2017 11:59:00 AM

Congratulations Jan, Lovely Pleiades, well deserved win :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2017 5:15:00 PM

Thanks Roy:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/1/2017 10:45:00 AM

Back with congratulations, Jan :) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2017 5:15:00 PM

Thanks Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 3/1/2017 9:56:00 AM

Delicious imagination you possess Jan!Congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2017 5:16:00 PM

Thanks Sara I am amazed at how vivid my imagination is!:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 3/1/2017 7:21:00 AM

Dropping back with my Congrats

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2017 5:17:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/1/2017 3:35:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great win in Pleiades I contest, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2017 5:17:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Deborah Burch

Date: 2/28/2017 10:19:00 PM

Congratulations Jan!:) I want some of that rain! ;) big hugs deb

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2017 5:37:00 PM

Thanks Deborah - i wish it would rain chocolate drops - we got hailstones today!:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2017 5:17:00 PM

Thanks Deborah - i wish it would rain chocolate drops - we got hailstones today!:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 2/28/2017 9:43:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 3/1/2017 5:18:00 PM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Hija De La Luna

Date: 2/27/2017 6:52:00 AM

Beautiful imagination, Jan! Lovely!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2017 6:56:00 AM

Thanks Hija:-) hugs Jan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/26/2017 4:40:00 AM

- Heavenly sweet gifts ... creative and wonderful, Jan - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) - ... I want to try one too ... a little later :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2017 7:00:00 AM

I love this form Anne Lise I hope Kim likes my poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Carol B.

Date: 2/25/2017 11:01:00 PM

I love your world where rain is iced chocolate. My kind of place :). Loved your write.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2017 7:00:00 AM

You are welcome to join me Carol:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 2/25/2017 8:52:00 PM

What a wonderful verse a winner already good luck in the contest dear friend

Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2017 7:02:00 AM

Thanks Eve I hope Kim likes my imagination lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2017 7:39:00 PM

Jan, I LOVE yours. You actually SHOWED imagination through your images. WELL DONE, my good friend!!! I hope this gets rated high. No telling what my Icy will get.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2017 7:02:00 AM

I tried to be creative Andrea ... I don't want to rush to get these things done lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/25/2017 5:00:00 PM

A very clever entry Jan. Your lines flow so effortlessly in this Pleiades....excellent! : ) 7

Jan Allison
Date: 2/25/2017 5:02:00 PM

Thanks so much Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/25/2017 4:49:00 PM

What a lovely imagination!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/25/2017 4:53:00 PM

I didn't realise how creative I could be Kim! it's not until I started writing that I discovered how vivid my imagination could be:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White

Date: 2/25/2017 3:50:00 PM

Oww, this flows so naturally Jan, it's wonderful and great :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/25/2017 3:54:00 PM

Thanks Darren:-) I had fun with this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 2/25/2017 2:40:00 PM

This is lovely and cute, Jan...you did use your colourful imagination:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 2/25/2017 3:54:00 PM

I didn't realise how vivid my imagination could be until I started writing lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/25/2017 12:07:00 PM

Oh, you're rocking my imagination too, Jan. I thought that first picture looked like scoops of ice cream, but I'm on a diet so everything looks like food. LOL Enjoyed your poem very much! Hugs, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 2/25/2017 12:20:00 PM

They do look like ice cream I agree lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/25/2017 11:40:00 AM

I liked how you used specific imagery to help describe your active imagination, Jan! GL in the contest :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/25/2017 12:19:00 PM

Thanks Laura I let my imagination flow with this one :-) hugs Jan xx