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Imagination

It is cloudy today, with a good chance of daydreams I'm prone on my back, and my chores have been done Instead of a nap, there is something that seems to call for attention and offer some fun Imagine you're me, in the afternoon sun With the sky as the ocean, and grass as my pillow I dream of adventure, adrift in a sea The clouds in formation, have gathered and billowed As the mast gathers wind, and sails down for me I'm swept to the sky on a wave, wild and free ! There's an elephant swimming!! And a white whale that frolics! And a long caterpillar, that follows to play! But, they're slowly dissolving, I become melancholic as the mast has collapsed, and the whale goes astray While the ship I was sailing, has faded away.
_______________________________________________________ 1/30/16 Contest: "Imagination"...Sponsored by Shadow Hamilton
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A   Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 1:37 AM
Carrie Congratulations on your fantastic win. Love LINDA
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 2:55 PM
I love to imagine clouds in different shapes and play with my granddaughter seeing cloud shapes. She is three, so I found your poem to really identify with what Shadow was asking for. Congratulations on your win Carrie.#7
Kimathi Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 7:51 AM
Hi Carrie. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
A  Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 3:27 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
George   Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 2:18 PM
Cloud gazing!!! I did it all the time when I was a kid and from time-to-time, I still do it. Sure to be a winner, Carrie.
Henderson Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 10:27 PM
As always I enjoyed your poem much today. Have been reading quite a bit, trying to do some payback. Carrie I always sense that every poem you write is the very best that you can make it before you let it go.
Kendrick Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
Allison Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 9:44 AM
what wonderful imagination Carrie I have so loved reading these poems:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Selfa Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your spectacular win!
Lane Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 5:41 AM
Congratulations, Carrie. Quite a vivid imagination.
Ebbs Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 10:43 PM
Congrats Carrie!
Scars Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 8:38 PM
Carrie, congrats on your placement *Smiles* -luloo
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