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It is cloudy today, with a good chance of daydreams I'm prone on my back, and my chores have been done Instead of a nap, there is something that seems to call for attention and offer some fun Imagine you're me, in the afternoon sun With the sky as the ocean, and grass as my pillow I dream of adventure, adrift in a sea The clouds in formation, have gathered and billowed As the mast gathers wind, and sails down for me I'm swept to the sky on a wave, wild and free ! There's an elephant swimming!! And a white whale that frolics! And a long caterpillar, that follows to play! But, they're slowly dissolving, I become melancholic as the mast has collapsed, and the whale goes astray While the ship I was sailing, has faded away.
_______________________________________________________ 1/30/16 Contest: "Imagination"...Sponsored by Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 2/6/2016 1:37:00 AM
Carrie Congratulations on your fantastic win. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/2/2016 2:55:00 PM
I love to imagine clouds in different shapes and play with my granddaughter seeing cloud shapes. She is three, so I found your poem to really identify with what Shadow was asking for. Congratulations on your win Carrie.#7
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Date: 2/2/2016 7:51:00 AM
Hi Carrie. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/1/2016 3:27:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 2/1/2016 2:18:00 PM
Cloud gazing!!! I did it all the time when I was a kid and from time-to-time, I still do it. Sure to be a winner, Carrie.
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Date: 1/31/2016 10:27:00 PM
As always I enjoyed your poem much today. Have been reading quite a bit, trying to do some payback. Carrie I always sense that every poem you write is the very best that you can make it before you let it go.
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Date: 1/31/2016 10:09:00 AM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/31/2016 9:44:00 AM
what wonderful imagination Carrie I have so loved reading these poems:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/31/2016 8:54:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your spectacular win!
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Date: 1/31/2016 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations, Carrie. Quite a vivid imagination.
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Date: 1/30/2016 10:43:00 PM
Congrats Carrie!
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Date: 1/30/2016 8:38:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on your placement *Smiles* -luloo
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