Teddy Kimathi Poet Free verse

Imagination

I saw a cloud; a big cloud.
It looked like a white temple;
an abode for people who have seen
and tasted the light of peace and harmony.

“If I am able to reach the cloud temple and knock
on its doors, will it open? Who will I see?”
I whispered to my self.



Date: 27/1/2016

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Poet Destroyer A February 16, 2016 at 10:32 PM Teddy, thank you for supporting my comment. That was nice of you. Love LINDA

Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2016 at 1:37 AM Teddy Congratulations on your fantastic win. Love LINDA Teddy Kimathi February 8, 2016 at 6:47 AM Thank you so much Linda! :-)

James Tate February 2, 2016 at 3:15 PM Good poem Teddy. I love the question you asked yourself in the ending. Teddy Kimathi February 4, 2016 at 5:54 AM Thanks James! :-) I love writing poems that also make one to question, apart from just reading a narrative or musings....

Connie Marcum Wong February 2, 2016 at 2:44 PM Congratulations Teddy, on your winning entry! Teddy Kimathi February 4, 2016 at 5:47 AM Thank you very much Connie! *^_^*

Skat A February 1, 2016 at 3:26 PM Teddy, Congratulations on your win. SKAT Teddy Kimathi February 2, 2016 at 5:12 AM Thank you so much Skat! *^_^*

Sara Kendrick January 31, 2016 at 10:08 AM Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara Teddy Kimathi February 2, 2016 at 5:10 AM Hi Sara. Thank you for your kind applause! *^_^*

Jan Allison January 31, 2016 at 9:43 AM many congrats Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx Teddy Kimathi February 2, 2016 at 5:08 AM Thank you so much Jan! *^_^*

Hansteven Selfa January 31, 2016 at 8:54 AM Teddy, congratulations on your spectacular win! Teddy Kimathi February 2, 2016 at 5:07 AM Thanks Hansteven! ;-)

Lin Lane January 31, 2016 at 5:39 AM well done and congrats, Teddy. Teddy Kimathi February 2, 2016 at 5:06 AM Thank you so much Lin! *^_^*